Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

Now this is cute, light, visual and very children oriented. A series would be wonderful, kiddo's would love it. I am smiling, Carolyn

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013

I don't know if I can do a series. This is an old poem.

Comment from zeldasmith

Excellent

This is cute and funny. It would probably be good for a children's poetry book. Have you entered it in any contests yet? See I told you you were a good writer. Vivid details. Great job my friend. Keep writing,

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013

Thanks again. It is amazing towite again. The words appear by magic.

Norm

reply by zeldasmith on 29-Jun-2013

You are funny..towite....like tweety pie...is that who you are my friend. Have a joy filled day with lots of smiles.
Toot aloo, Norm.

reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013

I wanted you to be the first to see my poem

Happy Days

Quiet is the peace of another world
Where raindrops drip
Magic
On a bed of leafy brown

It is the autumn
Of a new born day
And the sun
Drifting slowly accross the sky
Brings warmth
To a waiting landscape
Of grass and tree

The old man
Sitting pensively
On a rock
Pondering
Eternity
Smiles
And basks ib the rays
Of a sunlit shy

He rises
And begins a walk
Down memory lane

He sees bounty
And goodness
In a world of opportunity
And marvels with excitement
At the thoughts
Of his tomorrows

They would be happy times
Filled with family and friends
He would partake of their offerings
And love them all
Until eternity
Beckoned his core
And took him home

He smiled again
And skipped along
Thanking God
For all that is

Norm

reply by zeldasmith on 29-Jun-2013

You have two misspelled words: And basks ib the rays of a sunlit shy ...in for ib and sky for shy...other than that it is a beautiful poem. You really have a knack for writing. What part of the country are you from anyway?
Thanks for sharing with me...now post your poem.

reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013

I couldn't spell in school. Munster, Indiana. Where are you from?

reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013

I read my poem and it is correct. I can't type either.

Norm

reply by zeldasmith on 29-Jun-2013

I don't believe it. You're smarter than that. Get a dictionary. I'm from Collings Lakes, South N. J. It's near williamstown. I have relatives in Logansport, Indiana ...my father, God rest his soul, was born and raised there. I've been to IND several times. Nice place. Thanks for sharing.

reply by zeldasmith on 29-Jun-2013

Poo!

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

EVERYONE ONE WOULD LIKE TO BE A KID AGAIN TO SEE THE CIRCUS AND SOME ALWAYS WANTED TO RUN AWAY AND JOIN UP WITH THEM BECAUSE THEY THOUGHT IT WAS SO MUCH FUN

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013

Thanks for the nice review.

Norm

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

Very playful and joyous in attitude. Like you break your lines, makes for an easy read. I was wondering what your answer would be, and it was very simple. I should've known. Great job! Thanks for sharing. Les

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013

Thanks for the nice review.

Norm