Comment from zeldasmith

Excellent

Well this is full of truth. I could picture the subject stuffing his mouth with oozing cheese, pepperoni and all that greasy stuff on pizzas. It follows form......good luck in the contest. Good job poet.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013

Zelda: My name is Norm. Thank you for allthe kind words. It is greatly appreciated.

Norm

Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

This one deserves a picture. You can edit and add if you like, remember they are free from FanArt. I loved this one and you nailed the 5-7-5 line and syllable count.
:-) Carolyn

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013

Hi: I normally write for my own satisfaction. If this had a picture would it be good enough to enter into 1 5-7-5 contest? There is one going on right now?

reply by Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens on 27-Jun-2013

In my opinion it would make a great entry. However, once it has been released as this one has been, it is no longer eligible, as I understand it. Why don't you try a picture for practice and then 'before' you post choose a contest. Study those guidelines as well. I hope this helps. There is also a 'contact us' area for FS support. Tom, at helpdesk is fantastic, gets back quick with replies. Good luck, Carolyn

reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013

I put on a picture. I hope you like it.

Norm

reply by Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens on 27-Jun-2013

WOW, LOL, how perfect is that! You did it, now you are really on a rolllllll. Have a great day. By the way, that pizza made me hungry. :-) Carolyn

Comment from marijmd

Excellent

Ha ha - very charming and yet an important issue that we as a society are facing. 30% of the United States in obese. That is terrifying!

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013

Thanks for the review. I thought it to be funny too.