Comment from zeldasmith

Excellent

I like this poem. When I was reading I imagined myself inside my bottle stooping looking out but then trapped inside able to release everything except myself, the poem gives a vivid story....thanks for sharing. Good job poet.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013

Thanks for the review.

Norm

Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart

Excellent

Well this is a very interesting description of one's life and I really enjoyed the picture it painted in my mind. Good job. God loves you and I do too.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013

Thanks for the review.

Norm

Comment from bossladyone

Excellent

I like it. The poem is well written and flows nicely. All of the lines work well together. The thoughts you have about eternity says something about how you see life. I think that is interesting. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013

Thanks for the nice review. Did you ever have wriers block? I have that going on.

Norm

reply by bossladyone on 26-Jun-2013

Yes and I look at the supject someone else uses or just walk away