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Thoughts from the dark side

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Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
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An old poem and a new release.... You did it Norm. You are no longer a victim of depression, you are a survivor. Letting us read this poem took courage. I am glad those sad, dark days are behind you. :-) Carolyn

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
    Did you ever get writers block. I can't get a poem started.

    Norm
reply by Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens on 25-Jun-2013
    Yes, sometimes for days. It will come, keep that pencil and paper ready. Once, I wrote a poem on a pizza box, stuck in traffic. :-) Carolyn
Comment from donette1914
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I wrote a poem on suicide and we need to watch for warning sigs and have a listening ear, show love and suicide will vanish into thin air. please to take your life.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
    Thanks for the review. That was a very sad period in my life and one I never want to go through again.

    Norm
reply by donette1914 on 25-Jun-2013
    i wrote this wrong please don't take your life
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
    This was a long time ago. I am just getting the courage to put it to view.
Comment from zeldasmith
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Okay now you have me worried. Am I reading thoughts of a past life you left behind, or are you having these feelings right now as you write. I hope you are okay and not contemplating anything stupid. Poetry usually comes from the feelings we have within of some experience in our life. Please tell me you are okay. I like your poetry ...as it reminds me of my once self. Good job poet.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
    This is all in the past. I am releasing several black poems of the emotions Iwent through while ewnduring a deep depression.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
    This is all in the past. I am releasing several black poems of the emotions Iwent through while ewnduring a deep depression.
reply by zeldasmith on 25-Jun-2013
    Gotcha and hear yeah.
reply by zeldasmith on 25-Jun-2013
    What a relief. One of these days I'll release a few of my black ones.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
    It takes courage.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
    Thanks for your kind words. I have just a few more poems to publish and the I am through with the old stuff. I have writers block and can't write anymore.

    Norm