I Choose Rainbows
Viewing comments for Chapter 116 "Panic Attack"Thoughts from the dark side
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Comment from Brocha1
Your poem is so vivid. I feel like I am there with you. Your writing is very powerful especially the contrast between one word lines and multi-word lines.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Your poem is so vivid. I feel like I am there with you. Your writing is very powerful especially the contrast between one word lines and multi-word lines.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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What caused you to give it 4 stars rather than 5 or 6. I would appreciate an answeras I am new to the site.
Norm
Comment from WeaverofFeelings
Title fits the work. The way you describe it makes it seems like it something that I don't want to experince. I didn't know it was that bad. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Title fits the work. The way you describe it makes it seems like it something that I don't want to experince. I didn't know it was that bad. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Thanks for the review. It was nofun.
Norm
Comment from zeldasmith
I can relate to your poem, though I've never had anxiety attacks I have been so depressed I've wanted to end my life on more than one occasion.
Once I had such an emptiness I couldn't bear to live with myself...I was in an abyss sort to speak. So your poem rings bells in my ears. Good job expressing what you feel or have felt in the past. Keep writing. And I hope your panic attacks have passed. Good job port.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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I can relate to your poem, though I've never had anxiety attacks I have been so depressed I've wanted to end my life on more than one occasion.
Once I had such an emptiness I couldn't bear to live with myself...I was in an abyss sort to speak. So your poem rings bells in my ears. Good job expressing what you feel or have felt in the past. Keep writing. And I hope your panic attacks have passed. Good job port.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Depression and panicattacks are no fun. It was also difficult to go through.
Norm
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer does a good job of tapping into the emotion of the reader. I never had a panic attack but the writer describes it so well, I felt like I was having one. Good way to use those words.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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The writer does a good job of tapping into the emotion of the reader. I never had a panic attack but the writer describes it so well, I felt like I was having one. Good way to use those words.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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It is no fun
