Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Exceptional

I love it, what else can I say. You earned six stars on this one.
'A soft night, leaves fluttering, flapping,
floating, waving a final and peaceful
goodbye.'
Nicely done, Carolyn

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013

Thanks again. I appreciate your enthusiasm. I appreciate you. How badwas my poem, Afterlife"? Someone found the poem demeaning and gave me a three. I thought it was pretty good.


Norm

Comment from Sam Mendonca

Excellent

A very well written poem with great usage of decriptive wording from the writer.

The only suggestion I would have is to maybe add a photo, giving the reader an idea of the content.


Nicely written.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013

I think it costs money to use a photo. I have never done it.

reply by Sam Mendonca on 24-Jun-2013

You can use your own if you want.

Just google images to find what you would like to go along with your writing, save it in a file on your computer. Then when you do a writing, notice on the menu- upload image, click on it, you will then see browse, click on that and go to the file on your computer where you have the image storage and click on it. that will bring the image to fanstory.

Good luck if you give it a try. You need to put in the author's note the image is from google.

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Late evening when turtle doves fly down to rest on a limb or underbrush, I think of this poem. It is good and flows well with rhythm

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013

Thank you so much for the critique.

Norm