Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

Another great one, thank you for writing this. To have such a reunion and to pull it off so successfully is a marvel in itself. It was all in their eyes, those smiling eyes, that said, I love you, nicely done. :-) Carolyn

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013

You are wonderful

Norm

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

It was all in their eyes...those smiling eyes..that said ...I love you.
Simply beautiful..I also love the unconditional love part. So sweet and good... It's how I want to be ..loving my kids unconditionally.
God bless

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013

Thanks for the warm revue. Your comments are greatly appreciated.

Comment from SteveY

Excellent

Well this is sort of...BEAUTIFUL! Way to go! Just outstanding. Such great use of rhyme and perfect rhythm. Very descriptive with excellent poetic language!

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013

Thanks for the warm revue. Your comments are greatly appreciated.

Comment from david bell

Excellent

Isn't love great? We should honor those who we love. This form is a little unusual, but it really works. I think you are brilliant. Great job.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013

Thanks for the warm revue. Your comments are greatly appreciated.