Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Exceptional

Well done, do you plan to combine these wonderful free style pieces into a book? I can see that happening in a most successful way. I awarded a six to this poem for its clarity, it's message and the obvious intense thought that went into it. Well written and grammatically correct. Carolyn

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013

Carolyn: Thanks for the reviews. I am honored by your words.

Norm

reply by Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens on 22-Jun-2013

You are welcome,Norm.

reply by Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens on 22-Jun-2013

You are welcome,Norm.

reply by Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens on 22-Jun-2013

You are welcome, Norm.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I think time defines humanity for sure.. We are defined by time, mortal, physical ..but you make time too powerful .. The fact that we age and forget doesn't make us better...thanks for this it made me think... God bless

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013

Thanks for the warm revue. Your comments are greatly appreciated.

Comment from Jean Lagace

Excellent

Now, I think I like that theory better than Einstein. At least I understand the half of it. Soldiers in my army might want to fight yours though. It would be time against memory lost. True, one could say that it is the same thing. Then, we will have a party and sign a truce.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013

Thanks for the warm revue. Your comments are greatly appreciated.