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Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "Wake Up!"My thoughts about t
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Comment from robina1978
Excellent photo to complement this poem with a form you possibly invented yourself. You wrote so well about such a hot day. It has a nice structure this poem and story.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
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Excellent photo to complement this poem with a form you possibly invented yourself. You wrote so well about such a hot day. It has a nice structure this poem and story.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
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Thank you Ine.
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most welcome, Ine
Comment from Selina Stambi
Go, go, go .....!!!
Yes, yes - listen to the man - don't waste your life - it's too short!
I'm a get-up-and-go person and find it hard to deal with folks whose get up and go has got up and gone!
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
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Go, go, go .....!!!
Yes, yes - listen to the man - don't waste your life - it's too short!
I'm a get-up-and-go person and find it hard to deal with folks whose get up and go has got up and gone!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
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Thanks Sonali. Go figure!
Comment from NicciFaye
Exactly....do Something...and It starts by waking up and get moving. Great poem and motivating. Do you find these different poem types and structures on FS or somewhere else.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Exactly....do Something...and It starts by waking up and get moving. Great poem and motivating. Do you find these different poem types and structures on FS or somewhere else.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Thanks Nicci. FS carries several under the Home tab, then Poetry Dance, then All poetry. But many members create their own, like this one I created. You can also Google different types of poems.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treschel,
I do not know whether it is technically a poetic exhortation or not. But is certainly a rousing call to wake up and get moving which I think will be a characteristic or enlightened society. Thank you for your support.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Hi, Treschel,
I do not know whether it is technically a poetic exhortation or not. But is certainly a rousing call to wake up and get moving which I think will be a characteristic or enlightened society. Thank you for your support.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Thank you Preston. If it allow, I'll drink to that!
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A drink is always allowed in my enlightened society. Cheers
Comment from sunnilicious
The poem came out lyrical with good flow of rhymes. GOod author notes. Good format. Well thought out. Motivational. Enjoyable to read. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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The poem came out lyrical with good flow of rhymes. GOod author notes. Good format. Well thought out. Motivational. Enjoyable to read. Excellent work.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Thank you Sunnilicious, glad it moved you.
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Too cute. Thanks. You too.
Comment from Dean Kuch
So, this a Treischel original format! Outstanding. You should adorn it with a part of your name. After all, you did the research and created it. How about a 'treiscehllation exhortation?' That's cool, and rhymes, too. Or, if you want it to be more simple, what about 'T-verse exhot, or, just 'T-Verse'? it really should have your name attached to it, I believe.
As far as this wonderful 'T-Verse' poem goes, it certainly exalts the benefits of not being a couch-potato, as well as the great fellowship spent with family and friends exploring all the wonders of nature.
Your genuine love for all of Mother Nature's spectacular gifts God's granted her permission to bestow upon is, always shines through in your poetry. I'd love to see a story from you one day, detailing one of adventures spent outdoors. Or, perhaps you've written one already? I suppose I will have to delve deeper to find out.
Another wonderful offering here, Mr. T...
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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So, this a Treischel original format! Outstanding. You should adorn it with a part of your name. After all, you did the research and created it. How about a 'treiscehllation exhortation?' That's cool, and rhymes, too. Or, if you want it to be more simple, what about 'T-verse exhot, or, just 'T-Verse'? it really should have your name attached to it, I believe.
As far as this wonderful 'T-Verse' poem goes, it certainly exalts the benefits of not being a couch-potato, as well as the great fellowship spent with family and friends exploring all the wonders of nature.
Your genuine love for all of Mother Nature's spectacular gifts God's granted her permission to bestow upon is, always shines through in your poetry. I'd love to see a story from you one day, detailing one of adventures spent outdoors. Or, perhaps you've written one already? I suppose I will have to delve deeper to find out.
Another wonderful offering here, Mr. T...
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Thanks Dean. I appreciate your enthusiasm.
Comment from Capricorn30
I like this 12-line Exhortation, Tom;
Valid statements of the pleasures of water activity, promoting valuable time spent with family and friends.
Well-written, summer poem
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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I like this 12-line Exhortation, Tom;
Valid statements of the pleasures of water activity, promoting valuable time spent with family and friends.
Well-written, summer poem
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Thank you Capricorn. Life is for living. Glad to share.
Comment from donette1914
i like this very much, sometimes ones need a wake of call to do something instead of nothing and sitting at home watching tv well done it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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i like this very much, sometimes ones need a wake of call to do something instead of nothing and sitting at home watching tv well done it was a pleasure
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Thanks again Donnette.
Comment from The Death
Amazed to see your innovation and the research.
It delivers a magnetic message of living life non stop.
Irrespective of despairs,we should keep enjoying our lives.a gift to cherish
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Amazed to see your innovation and the research.
It delivers a magnetic message of living life non stop.
Irrespective of despairs,we should keep enjoying our lives.a gift to cherish
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Thank you so much anupam .
