Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

This one is profound in it's very nature. It, without intent gives all credit to a creator. A designer that needs no introduction, no questions and provides all the answers, in your word, Acceptance. Acceptance is contentment. Great job, I enjoyed the meaning it held for me. Carolyn

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013

Thanks for the warm revue. Your comments are greatly appreciated.

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

GOD CREATED THE WORLD AND MADE ADAM AND EVE THEN THE WORLD EVOLVED INTO MANY AND WE NEVER QUESTIONED WHY HE PUT PEOPLE OF ALL KIDS ON AND IN DIFFERENT WORLDS AND COUNTRIES SO THERE WOULD BE A WORLD OF PEACE BUT IT WASN'T TO BE SO BECAUSE OF GREED AND TILL THIS DAY GREED IS THE ROOT OF ALL EVIL THAT IS WHY THERE IS NO PEACE IN THE WORLD TODAY

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013

Thanks for the commentary.

Norm

reply by country ranch writer on 20-Jun-2013

WELCOME

Comment from JB Lynn

Excellent

I like how you match specific concrete images to the more general concepts in your poem. Really brings it to life for me. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013

Thanks for the critique.

Norm