Comment from Bryon1248

Excellent

As I can find no note of your write I can only review what I perceive within these words...

So, I enjoyed your jib at the world, at mans perfection within his own eyes, of conceit and chauvinism as opposed to modesty and reserve, idealism as opposed to realism..
An intriguing read that lead this reader to revisit and still leave in wonder

Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013

Thanks for the review. Just curious as I am new to Fanstory. In your opinion, what does it take to get 6 stars? I notice every poem gets 5 stars.

Norm

reply by Bryon1248 on 18-Jun-2013

I am new too, as in two day new... so I am not sure... sorry

Bryon

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

I believe you have hit the "cockiness" idea of this piece exactly. It has a narcissistic feel to it but is well written! xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013

Thanks for the review. I appreciate your comments.

Norm