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World of Divination

Nations of Lost Generations

4 total reviews 
Comment from O. Warfield
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I like this 5-7-5. We can only foresee a better future if we come together now. In the future, let us not be able to look back on lost generations of no hope.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2013

reply by the author on 15-Aug-2013
    I agree..Thank you.
    United we stand, and Divided we fall. Time only can tell..
    Peace be with you, also good luck in god speed.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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Shadowing my Mind.
In the Cold, Out of Control.
Lost Generations

a clever use of words in this short piece, Firkus.
It's amazing how one can say so much in so few words.

good luck with the contest, my friend.

Margaret

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2013

reply by the author on 15-Aug-2013
    Thank you for your review on World of Divination
    Peace be with you, good luck in god speed.
Comment from SteveY
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Nicely done my friend. You seemed to have locked up a whole lot in these few short lines. I can almost feel myself there in the cold and lost! Very nice.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2013

reply by the author on 19-Jun-2013
    Thank you for your Opinion.
    Poem took sometime..
    Good Luck in god speed an may peace be with you.
Comment from NicciFaye
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I thought this was a simple and perfect Haiku. Lots of deep thought entwined into a 5/7/5 poem. You've did well at keeping the format of the poem. Job well done.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2013

reply by the author on 19-Jun-2013
    Thank you.

    Good Luck in god speed an may peace be with you.