Comment from SteveY

Excellent

Short, sweet, excellent rhyme, and rhythm. There is not a lot to comment on this one except that you did a very nice job. Keep the creativity coming!

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013

Thank you for taking the time to review my poem. It is short but real.

Norm

Comment from ronnie k

Good

A good idea for your poem but it could use body, with a look back I am sure you will be able to find words to enrich this poem. Ronnie k

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013

I THOUGHT OF MAKING IT LONGER BUT THEN i DECIDED IT WOULDN'T BE SIMPLE ANYMORE. i JUST RELEASED A LONGER LOVE POEM WHICH IS MORE SERIOUS.

nORM

reply by ronnie k on 17-Jun-2013

you have a five star on your horizon when I read you, you a good at this!

Comment from Jose Saic

Excellent

A nice short poem of love. it has something of musical poetry.
I like i.
Congratulations to the author.
 

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013

Thanks for the review. The poem is short and sweet to capture the innocence of love,