Comment from SaluteDobby

Excellent

Wow.. that was profound!I really liked the pace. The 3rd stanza makes one stop and think. Interestingly, sometimes, when the most momentous occasion of life occurs, time seems to stand still.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013

Thanks for the critique. I would like to read one of your poems.

Comment from Brian Terry

Exceptional

There are a number of deep issues brought out in this thoughtful poem.
The first verse nicely sums up the major philosophical, cosmological and theological dilemma.
Verses 2 and three encapsulate the mystery of time. Is the flow constant?
I liked the irony in the last verse.
All in all a thought provoking poem.
Oh and by thr way I liked it a lot

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013

Brian: Thanks for the review. Life has a lot of things to contemplate.

Comment from trevorletang

Excellent

5 stars for that serious game of life poemed so playfully. Quite a lot of thought went into it with reverse plots in pattern done.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013

Thanks for the review. I sometimes get more serious than I should.

Norm