Comment from Rhyming Fool

Good

Cute poem. Nice rhymes. The last two lines could be a little better. Perhaps a making them a little less direct and more symbolic. Like,

We're both in the pot
We love coffee a lot

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2013

Thanks for the review. I will consider the change.

Norm

Comment from SteveY

Excellent

Wow! I never knew that coffee drinking could become something so erotic! But somehow you managed to stir up different feelings with this one. What a nice surprise.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2013

Thanks for the compliment. I drink a lot of coffee.

Comment from NicciFaye

Excellent

Simple, yet beautiful cute. I enjoyed this poem. It threw me off, as I just read a poem about coffee, but it was purely about the LOVE of coffe, where as this one is the love of two and their love for coffee...Great poem.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2013

Thanks for the review. I drink a lot of coffee.