Comment from Alexander E Poet

Excellent

I thought this was a well-written poetry good I like you letter like poem, imagery and good use words
Love this I thought it was very creative

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013

Thanks for the review. I enjoyed writing it.

Norm

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

This is a cute portrait poem. I was wondering if an actual boy or a photo inspired you.
The line:
I wish they would play two

confused me as I wasn't sure of two what?

The image of stars being planted like seeds and watered every day by God was interesting. Nice job!

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013

Thanks for the review. I enjoyed writing it.

Norm

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

I really enjoyed this adorable poem! It sounds just like what a little boy might say. I must say, though, that I don't see how dimples could make one's eyes glow.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013

Thanks for the review. I enjoyed writing it.

Norm

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

This is a good poem its like the boy is having a conversation with the poet I like that and the fact that everything is left to the readers imagination thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013

Thanks for the review. I enjoyed writing it.

Norm

Comment from NicciFaye

Excellent

Great conversation!!! Love the poem from the eyes of a child, always interesting to hear what they have to say. Sometimes they are smarter than us adults.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2013

Thanks for the review. What would I have to do to make this poem exceptional?

Norm

Comment from KYPollard/El Gato

Excellent

I wish they would play two --this line confuses me. I wish they would play two what? Or did you mean I wish they would play too? Thank you for sharing this.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2013

In Chicago one of the statements about the Cubs I "Let's play two games today"' Ernie Banks said it.

Thanks,

Norm

Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart

Excellent

this is really a very delightful poem, It has a positive message all the way through of parents that are building the child's self confidence and allowing him discover all of the wonderful things around him. Good job. god loves you and I do too.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2013

Thanks for the critique. What would I have to do to make this exceptional?

Norm

reply by Evelyn Fort Stewart on 12-Jun-2013

I'm not a poet so I'm not sure from a poetic view point. I would personally give it a 6, I just don't have another one. Personally I love pictures that catch the scene of the poem, but that's just me. God loves you and I do too. Often pieces are given 5's because all the sixes we have are gone or we have given the writer to two sixes we are aloud to do each month. That's one rule I think really needs to be changed.