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Comment from Gungalo
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Children learn very fast Tom and usually by mimicking someone. It's amazing but if you watch them you might learn something yourself. LOL.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
    Thank you Gungalo. Kids are amazing to watch.
reply by Gungalo on 07-Jul-2013
    Yeah they are.
Comment from Glasstruth
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Learning, as you write is all over the place. One must look wherever and whenever. I think learning is like being a sponge taking it all in. Like the freeness of this. Well done! Les

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
    Thank you Les. I agree, the opportunity to learn is everywhere.
Comment from Martin Chan
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A free verse written in different form. How does one learn? Watch, think, read, listen and try. Hope everybody could learn. Nice advice, Keep trying. Children learn naturally. A good thinking with nice writing.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
    Thank you Martin Chan for stopping by and commenting. I appreciate it.
Comment from dmt1967
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People learn more by their failures than their successes I think this is a very thoughtful poem and I like the picture thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
    Thank you dmt. I glad you appreciate the sentiment.
Comment from 9999pool
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Children like other animals have a way of learning things in their own way. With the full five senses guiding them they learn to be knowledgeable as they grow.
A novel way to let the words float in our minds as we think with a hope of keep trying when life gets us down.
Good write and the poems float by briskly and grasp our attention very well.
Cheerio, Ritchie.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2013
    Thanks Ritchie. Thought I'd give you a little eye exercise.
reply by 9999pool on 12-Jun-2013
    Hi Tom. I was expecting a big "S" with the floating words meaning we have got to be "Superman" to learn everything in a lifetime!
    LOL.
    Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment from ravenblack
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like the form, in fact, i'm flattered. the photo fits well as the words float on the page as if daring to be hooked. the key to learning - snagging the fish and letting it go so you can keep trying.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2013
    I'm glad you liked the form since I was emulating you. I told a couple of reviewers who commented on it to look at your work To see the Master of the style.
Comment from robina1978
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Lovely photo again made by you and it complements this poem very well. It has a nice structure and tells us all about learning. Keep them coming like this.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2013
    Thank you Ine. It was a fun write.
reply by robina1978 on 12-Jun-2013
    most welcome, Ine
Comment from Sararb
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Wow! A great foremat. I loved reading your poem. That is a great photo for this poem. An adventure for children everyday learning new things. Sara :)

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2013
    Thank you Sara. Though I give your eyes some exercise.
Comment from sunnilicious
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I think learning is a process that once we start... it just continues on naturally. And so, we understand more complex issues to develop as a grown-up. Fishing sounds like good fun, especially to learn. Nice work.

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2013
    Thank you Sunni. Fishing creates patience and good bonding.
Comment from Capricorn30
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And a perfect backdrop indeed it is!
Great creativity in the format, as a lesson is learned in fun, meaningful fashion.
Excellent!

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2013
    Thank you so much Capricorn.