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Comment from mikenbel
Awesome! Another Tuscan Strombata - just without the closing couplet. I really like the sentiment you present. Freedom is NOT free and I wish there was a way without causing pain that our fellow countryman could understand how precious this gift really is.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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Awesome! Another Tuscan Strombata - just without the closing couplet. I really like the sentiment you present. Freedom is NOT free and I wish there was a way without causing pain that our fellow countryman could understand how precious this gift really is.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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Thank you mikenbel.I agree with that sentiment.
Comment from Selina Stambi
A beautiful, lyrically strident piece.
Never heard of a Tuscan Strombata before - sounds prettily exotic!
Love the liberal sprinkling of alliteration.
Another wonderful creation from the facile hand of the word weaver.
Well done, Tom! :)
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2013
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A beautiful, lyrically strident piece.
Never heard of a Tuscan Strombata before - sounds prettily exotic!
Love the liberal sprinkling of alliteration.
Another wonderful creation from the facile hand of the word weaver.
Well done, Tom! :)
Comment Written 07-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2013
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Thank you Sonali. Your words are very nice to my ears.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
This is excellent poetry. It has good rhyme and flow. It has good imagery and figurative language It meets the requirements of the Tuscan Strombata. I enjoyed reading it.
Preston
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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Hi, Treischel,
This is excellent poetry. It has good rhyme and flow. It has good imagery and figurative language It meets the requirements of the Tuscan Strombata. I enjoyed reading it.
Preston
Comment Written 06-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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Thanks Preston. I was worried that it wasn't Spanish enough for tnis format.
Comment from donkeyoatey
How true, freedom IS NOT free, someone paid so we could picnic! I find it odd that veterans do not get veterans day off...? Thank you so much for choosing my art, it means a lot. Donkeyoatey
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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How true, freedom IS NOT free, someone paid so we could picnic! I find it odd that veterans do not get veterans day off...? Thank you so much for choosing my art, it means a lot. Donkeyoatey
Comment Written 06-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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Thank you donkeyoatey. You patriot artwork was perfect foe this. thank YOU.
Comment from country ranch writer
SOME PEOPLE ONLY THINK OF THEMSELVES ON DAYS LIKE THOSE LISTED ABOVE THEY FORGET WHAT FREEDOM IS ALL ABOUT AND THEY WONDER WHY THE COUNTRY IS IN SUCH A MESS! ALL THEY THINK ABOUT IS HAVING A PARTY AND GETTING DRUNK AND THEY COULDN'T TELL YOU THEY ARE CELEBRATING EXCEPT THAT THEY HAVE THE DAY OFF.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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SOME PEOPLE ONLY THINK OF THEMSELVES ON DAYS LIKE THOSE LISTED ABOVE THEY FORGET WHAT FREEDOM IS ALL ABOUT AND THEY WONDER WHY THE COUNTRY IS IN SUCH A MESS! ALL THEY THINK ABOUT IS HAVING A PARTY AND GETTING DRUNK AND THEY COULDN'T TELL YOU THEY ARE CELEBRATING EXCEPT THAT THEY HAVE THE DAY OFF.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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Thank you country ranch writer, too true. Glad you liked my poem.
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WELCOME
Comment from Gungalo
We much too often take these things for granted,
Forgetting how dear freedom's seeds were planted.
Tom this is a great Tuscan Strombata and a wonderful example for those who follow. We have so much to be happy over and this should tell those who don't know.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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We much too often take these things for granted,
Forgetting how dear freedom's seeds were planted.
Tom this is a great Tuscan Strombata and a wonderful example for those who follow. We have so much to be happy over and this should tell those who don't know.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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Thank you so much Gungalo.
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Smile Tom
