Comment from SteveY

Good

Wow, I really like this. It must be hard writing a poem with only 3 lines. I've never tried it, but more of this sentiment needs to be practiced on a daily basis. Great job and keep writing.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2013

This was my first attempt, glad it came over well. Thanks for the feedback and review.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

You have made effective use of every syllbale in this clever, amusing poem. I like the self-effacing approach
as a vehicle for humor.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2013

Thanks for the feedback and review, hope it brought a smile!

Comment from Zinnia48

Excellent

My first real laugh of the day! Thanks! You have a lovely sense of humor about yourself. I appreciate this poem's exercise in humor. CAroline

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2013

Thank you and glad it brought a laugh!

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form
good alliterative pairing of funny and face
I love the humor in your poem - you made me smile in just three short lines :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2013

Thanks so much for the kind words!

Comment from amada

Excellent

Life is too short not to smile...Wonderful quote! You wrote a very good follow up to it, and all in just three lines. Smiles for the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2013

Thank you for the kind words, just getting started here, but the people are nice and looking forward to enhancing my writing!

Comment from donaldww

Excellent

This poem satisfies the rules of the 5-7-5 contest. The syllable count is perfect and the subject appropriate. Good luck with the contest.

Cheers,
DW

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2013

Thanks for the rating and feedback, most appreciated.