SOCKer
Will I KICK the Goal?31 total reviews
Comment from Selina Stambi
they just mount in furry flocks
I feel as though I can't compete
And give up on the bloody socks ... one mum to another - know exactly how you feel, dear! :)
*sigh*
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Well...
... my goodness, this lively little piece bounced along like a radio skit. You've created something dramatic out of socks ...
I love the sense of humourous drama you create out of a mother's mundane mayhem!
So glad I saw this!
Hugs xxx
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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they just mount in furry flocks
I feel as though I can't compete
And give up on the bloody socks ... one mum to another - know exactly how you feel, dear! :)
*sigh*
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Well...
... my goodness, this lively little piece bounced along like a radio skit. You've created something dramatic out of socks ...
I love the sense of humourous drama you create out of a mother's mundane mayhem!
So glad I saw this!
Hugs xxx
Comment Written 12-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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LOL Thanks so much for stopping by and for the sixer on my socker poem.
Cheers P
PS I enjoy giving the mundane a voice. LOL
Comment from kiwigirl2821
She has socks
Socks for frocks
Socks that rock
Drip and dry
Why bloody try
Makes a grown woman cry
Looking at all those socks
She'd rather be buying stocks
Than matching up those frickin socks!
Loved it and you. Hoo bloody ray! lmao xoxo d
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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She has socks
Socks for frocks
Socks that rock
Drip and dry
Why bloody try
Makes a grown woman cry
Looking at all those socks
She'd rather be buying stocks
Than matching up those frickin socks!
Loved it and you. Hoo bloody ray! lmao xoxo d
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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LOL Thanks kiwi loved your review
Hope you're well, hugs P xoxo
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
okay, so socking it to you with a six because you make me fucking laugh and I miss your writes cos too few are coming through. Loads of gos for you, but not for public consumption so will email you. love ya loads, Connie xxxxxx
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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okay, so socking it to you with a six because you make me fucking laugh and I miss your writes cos too few are coming through. Loads of gos for you, but not for public consumption so will email you. love ya loads, Connie xxxxxx
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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LOL Thanks mate, my time here has dried up lately, business and family has taken over for the time being and it sux not having more time here. YES, please email me...I'm currently a little confoosed with things LMAO...Help?
The sixer is MUCH appreciated sweetheart.
Hugs P
xxx
Comment from adewpearl
excellent use of alternate-line rhyming and good steady use of iambic meter
I really like the modified refrain line in each stanza :-)
great alliteration and humor in furry flocks
This is lots of fun from first line to that final stanza :-)
I like that when you write humor, you don't sacrifice technique. So many fan story writers think either humor or Jesus can carry the day so that when they write funny or faith poems, they can just toss a few words out :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2013
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excellent use of alternate-line rhyming and good steady use of iambic meter
I really like the modified refrain line in each stanza :-)
great alliteration and humor in furry flocks
This is lots of fun from first line to that final stanza :-)
I like that when you write humor, you don't sacrifice technique. So many fan story writers think either humor or Jesus can carry the day so that when they write funny or faith poems, they can just toss a few words out :-) Brooke
Comment Written 07-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2013
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LOL Thanks Brooke. The furry sock covers thank you too.
I never sacrifice technique because the meter is usually determined by the content and I just try to follow.
Many thanks for your positive encouragement.
Cheers P
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Comment from Mastery
Hi, Pip! LOL...Sorry, I'm not laughing at you....but With you. I really feel your pain. I love this though:
"A massive pile I always greet
They're not in singles just like socks
Some mother/wife pre-requisite
That I pair up these bloody socks"
I have been away for a while, but back in the saddle again...just posted a first chapter to a new book. Take care. Bob
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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Hi, Pip! LOL...Sorry, I'm not laughing at you....but With you. I really feel your pain. I love this though:
"A massive pile I always greet
They're not in singles just like socks
Some mother/wife pre-requisite
That I pair up these bloody socks"
I have been away for a while, but back in the saddle again...just posted a first chapter to a new book. Take care. Bob
Comment Written 05-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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LOL Thanks Bob...I see you've been away, Sorry but I think I defanned you, can't remember.
I culled a bunch that I hadn't reviewed or seen online for ages.
If thats the case I'll refan. Glad to have you back.
Thanks for the sixer and I look forward to reading you again.
Hugs Pip
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Yeah...I need your fandom,Pip! I've always enoyed your friendship. Bob
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Me too
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Comment from Laurent Andre Menot
Your poem does not suks, it rocks and socks.
It would never have crossed my mind to write a poem about socks! It sounds like an obsession! Is there more to come? What about underwear poetry? :)
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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Your poem does not suks, it rocks and socks.
It would never have crossed my mind to write a poem about socks! It sounds like an obsession! Is there more to come? What about underwear poetry? :)
Comment Written 05-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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LOL Thanks Laurent
It has crossed my twisted mind to write not one but three poems. Yes, I confess, I have a socks obsession. LOL
Only ONE underwear poem haha...its a sterling rap too...
If you wanna read it you'll have to find it...LOL
Its in my port, you'll have to dig way down under to find it! *smirk*
Hugs P
xo
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I will look for your underwear, can't wait! Lol
xoxo
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LOL
You'll never locate it. The title is WAY too elusive.
Good luck~! x
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Phillippa,
Quite utterly brilliant. You, my dear, are just about the best bloody rhyme and metre poet on this site and what an imagination. I have just finished a brilliant book on the cosmos and Black Holes, which seem to be filling up with something. Just think about it. It could mean the collapse of the Universe, so get a grip on things.
Reg
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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Dear Phillippa,
Quite utterly brilliant. You, my dear, are just about the best bloody rhyme and metre poet on this site and what an imagination. I have just finished a brilliant book on the cosmos and Black Holes, which seem to be filling up with something. Just think about it. It could mean the collapse of the Universe, so get a grip on things.
Reg
Comment Written 05-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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LOL I think you are seriously biased, but I'm lovin' it.
LMAO
Thanks Reginald. ALWAYS get a kick outta your reviews and hope to get a grip on something real soon. Hopefully some better content than darned socks...Oooh a pun? Me sorry! LOL
Hugs P
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Comment from Dougspoetry
So I guess the goal is to make the last stanza come true. SURE IT IS! Nice poem, full of truth and miss matched socks. I really like the first stanza. Great rhyming my FRIEND!
God Bless!
Doug
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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So I guess the goal is to make the last stanza come true. SURE IT IS! Nice poem, full of truth and miss matched socks. I really like the first stanza. Great rhyming my FRIEND!
God Bless!
Doug
Comment Written 04-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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LOL Thanks Douglas. I've NEVER made the last bit ever come true.
I just have a bad relationship with the foot covers.
Thanks for the sixer, loved your review.
Cheers P
xoxo
Comment from Darkhorse555
holy mother of smoke what a load of socks I hope they are all clean I saw one of them socks moving in this piece I really enjoyed clapping two socks
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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holy mother of smoke what a load of socks I hope they are all clean I saw one of them socks moving in this piece I really enjoyed clapping two socks
Comment Written 04-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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Holy mother of smoke what a beaut review.
Thanks a load, of socks. haha
Cheers P
Comment from Warren Rodgers
haha Only your third you say? You may need to write a few more before you can be considered healed lol. Enjoyed reading your poem very much with its great rhythm and rhyme, as usual! Clever simile with "unmatched and odd as ticks are tocks", ain't that the truth! I hate that job too, I keep waiting for the day when I dump the basket on the bed and each pair is cuddling their partner ready to be neatly tucked away. I know, I'm a dreamer ! LOL
Excellent write, my friend!
All the best, Wazzzza
xoxo
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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haha Only your third you say? You may need to write a few more before you can be considered healed lol. Enjoyed reading your poem very much with its great rhythm and rhyme, as usual! Clever simile with "unmatched and odd as ticks are tocks", ain't that the truth! I hate that job too, I keep waiting for the day when I dump the basket on the bed and each pair is cuddling their partner ready to be neatly tucked away. I know, I'm a dreamer ! LOL
Excellent write, my friend!
All the best, Wazzzza
xoxo
Comment Written 04-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2013
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LOL Yes ONLY the third mate! LOL Thanks for your enchanting review Wazza, loved it as always.
Hugs CPJ
xoxo
PS Yes, I like the sock cuddling buddy up system idea you'd like to implement...when you have it perfected email me the f**king formula would ya?
LOL
XXX