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Comment from Maguy Daoud
Lovely poem indeed, we are always under the Satan control some times, but Jesus is the one and only person if I may say that who didn't seduced by the Satan. I hope to every one in this world and especially to my husband and daughter to not be controlled under his spells because it's really destructive and the good will not enter our life again.
We can fight the Satan with the prayers.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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Lovely poem indeed, we are always under the Satan control some times, but Jesus is the one and only person if I may say that who didn't seduced by the Satan. I hope to every one in this world and especially to my husband and daughter to not be controlled under his spells because it's really destructive and the good will not enter our life again.
We can fight the Satan with the prayers.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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Thank you Maguy. Yes, your words are wise.
Comment from NicciFaye
OMG....I truly love this poem. I wish I had a six. So powerful you really hit home with this one friend. Wow...I love the repeating of these specific lines, they really meant something, I loved how you told a heroic story..and how it ended with a great reminder...I could hear this in my end as I read it...I really loved this poem. Amazing...
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013
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OMG....I truly love this poem. I wish I had a six. So powerful you really hit home with this one friend. Wow...I love the repeating of these specific lines, they really meant something, I loved how you told a heroic story..and how it ended with a great reminder...I could hear this in my end as I read it...I really loved this poem. Amazing...
Comment Written 01-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013
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Thank you Nicci. I can tell you were moved, I'm glad.
Comment from mikenbel
This poem tells a wonderful story of the conflict between Christ and Satan. I like the way you write this - almost like a song. You should submit this to a worship team and have them put music to it.
reply by the author on 31-May-2013
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This poem tells a wonderful story of the conflict between Christ and Satan. I like the way you write this - almost like a song. You should submit this to a worship team and have them put music to it.
Comment Written 31-May-2013
reply by the author on 31-May-2013
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Thank you Mikenbel. Not a bad idea.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi. Treischel,
This markedly superior poetry. You really out did your self on the rhyme, meter, repitition and flow. The scriptual cites were effective. I enjoyed reading this one aloud and I am not a Believer. Your passion certainly came through.
Preston
reply by the author on 31-May-2013
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Hi. Treischel,
This markedly superior poetry. You really out did your self on the rhyme, meter, repitition and flow. The scriptual cites were effective. I enjoyed reading this one aloud and I am not a Believer. Your passion certainly came through.
Preston
Comment Written 31-May-2013
reply by the author on 31-May-2013
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Thank you Preston. I am pleased and amazed that even a non-believer would rank it so highly. I appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from Staplesque
This is beautiful and powerfully written. I found it very enjoyable and thought-provoking. The only thing I noticed was where you have "The angles came and tended..." I think you meant "angels"! Otherwise this is wonderful. Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 31-May-2013
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This is beautiful and powerfully written. I found it very enjoyable and thought-provoking. The only thing I noticed was where you have "The angles came and tended..." I think you meant "angels"! Otherwise this is wonderful. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 31-May-2013
reply by the author on 31-May-2013
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Thanks Staplesque. Yes, you caught a typo. Fixed it.
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Hope that might improve the rating.
Comment from Darkhorse555
wow that picture in itself speaks to me in voloumes my light in stormy seas excellent piece of work I really loved it thank you god bless
reply by the author on 31-May-2013
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wow that picture in itself speaks to me in voloumes my light in stormy seas excellent piece of work I really loved it thank you god bless
Comment Written 31-May-2013
reply by the author on 31-May-2013
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Thank you . Darkhorse.
Comment from Gungalo
So
Don't give up
Don't give up
When temptation has come on
Tell Satan
To "Be Gone".
Nice free verse Tom and a lovely poem about what to do if tempted by Satan. Beautiful.
reply by the author on 31-May-2013
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So
Don't give up
Don't give up
When temptation has come on
Tell Satan
To "Be Gone".
Nice free verse Tom and a lovely poem about what to do if tempted by Satan. Beautiful.
Comment Written 31-May-2013
reply by the author on 31-May-2013
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Thank you Gungalo. Not sure where that one came from.
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LOL who knows?
