Bedtime Talk
6 year old becomes a mediator of love22 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
Your tale shows how a small child can have an impact and bring two people back together. Excellent flow of dialog that is realistic and is believable between an adult and a child.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Your tale shows how a small child can have an impact and bring two people back together. Excellent flow of dialog that is realistic and is believable between an adult and a child.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Thank you, sweet Mermaid!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a sweet story about the innocence of a child and that impacted the family's life. I enjoyed reading this. Your lines flow smoothly and the dialogue sounds just like that a young child would say. I like the ending very much. Who says children should be seen and not heard?
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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What a sweet story about the innocence of a child and that impacted the family's life. I enjoyed reading this. Your lines flow smoothly and the dialogue sounds just like that a young child would say. I like the ending very much. Who says children should be seen and not heard?
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thanks Jan, appreciated!
Comment from MAMONIA
This is absolutely sweet. I love the dialogue. It has true meaning. Love can conquer all if we leave our hearts open.
A great little story you have here. It happens a lot in this world.
Leave it to the children to mend the hurts we incur on each other.
This was very uplifting. Thanks.
Marie
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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This is absolutely sweet. I love the dialogue. It has true meaning. Love can conquer all if we leave our hearts open.
A great little story you have here. It happens a lot in this world.
Leave it to the children to mend the hurts we incur on each other.
This was very uplifting. Thanks.
Marie
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Marie. This was a repost from some time ago. I was reviewing some old stuff in my portfolio and remembered the fun I had in writing it. So glad you liked it.
Comment from Anne Johnston
I love your story, and wouldn't it be nice if all situations like this could be remedied so easily. Children can be so honest and I am sure split families are very hard on them. Hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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I love your story, and wouldn't it be nice if all situations like this could be remedied so easily. Children can be so honest and I am sure split families are very hard on them. Hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thank you for reviewing and I agree with your insightful comments.
God bless, Dennis
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You are welcome
Comment from l.raven
Hi Dennis, so good to see you sweet guy...
I guess it comes down to...no one is perfect...
we all make mistakes...you ask Jesus for forgiveness...
and if you are true...He will forgive you...
and remember when there are children present...
remember they get hurt too...and don't understand...
I love your story told....so very touching...and very well written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Hi Dennis, so good to see you sweet guy...
I guess it comes down to...no one is perfect...
we all make mistakes...you ask Jesus for forgiveness...
and if you are true...He will forgive you...
and remember when there are children present...
remember they get hurt too...and don't understand...
I love your story told....so very touching...and very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Hi Sweetie, Hope you are doing well! Thanks for your always encouraging words! God bless you always, Lovely Linda!
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your so welcome Dennis...always sweet guy...
God Bless...love xxoo
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your so welcome Dennis...always sweet guy...
God Bless...love xxoo
Comment from L. Kalere
This is, of course a very relatable story, albeit with a fairy-tale ending. I like the positive feel of love all around, instead of the usual recrimination. Well done.
Linda
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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This is, of course a very relatable story, albeit with a fairy-tale ending. I like the positive feel of love all around, instead of the usual recrimination. Well done.
Linda
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Heartwarming--I'm a sucker for a happy ending. Adorable child and touching interaction between her and dad sounds real. Wish real-life wrapped up so simply!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Heartwarming--I'm a sucker for a happy ending. Adorable child and touching interaction between her and dad sounds real. Wish real-life wrapped up so simply!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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I second your emotion! Thanks!
Comment from Susan Newell
A story told with dialogue only. I wish all separations could end this way. It's all so much easier when one or the other doesn't screw up (or around) in the first place. Forgiveness is difficult to live out, when something can not be forgotten. Your happy ending is encouraging for both forgiveness and hope. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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A story told with dialogue only. I wish all separations could end this way. It's all so much easier when one or the other doesn't screw up (or around) in the first place. Forgiveness is difficult to live out, when something can not be forgotten. Your happy ending is encouraging for both forgiveness and hope. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Stats show if struggling marriages stay together for 5 years the relationship really does get better. Sometimes our unrealistic expectations have to be ditched with our own over blown self esteem.
Thanks for reviewing and sometimes children are "the ties that bind".
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Smart kid waves her magic and helped her parents mend their relationship.
I love a happy ending story. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Smart kid waves her magic and helped her parents mend their relationship.
I love a happy ending story. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Thank you for reviewing!
Comment from royowen
I think this lovely, brought tears. So many promising relationships end in separation or divorce, and why? Someone has made a terrible mistake, and it seems to be one that can't be forgiven, but if God can forgive us in Jesus, why can't we forgive each other, lovely story, Denis, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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I think this lovely, brought tears. So many promising relationships end in separation or divorce, and why? Someone has made a terrible mistake, and it seems to be one that can't be forgiven, but if God can forgive us in Jesus, why can't we forgive each other, lovely story, Denis, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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I think I had tears when I wrote it...your comments are right on! Thanks Roy
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Good job
