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Comment from Galactia
I've never heard of this form, you have me intrigued. You certainly knitted this poem up nicely. I always love seeing new forms. you certainly did this form to a T.
great job
regards
Tia
reply by the author on 16-May-2013
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I've never heard of this form, you have me intrigued. You certainly knitted this poem up nicely. I always love seeing new forms. you certainly did this form to a T.
great job
regards
Tia
Comment Written 16-May-2013
reply by the author on 16-May-2013
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Thank you so much Tia. I glad you liked the poem and the form.
Comment from Sararb
I loved this poem, as I am also a knitter. I love the way you created a poem from watching your wife knitting. I love the foreman of this style. A new one for me. Good job, and very creative. Sara :)
reply by the author on 15-May-2013
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I loved this poem, as I am also a knitter. I love the way you created a poem from watching your wife knitting. I love the foreman of this style. A new one for me. Good job, and very creative. Sara :)
Comment Written 15-May-2013
reply by the author on 15-May-2013
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Thank you Sara. Cheers to knitter's. I know I couldn't do it.
Comment from sunnilicious
That poem came out nicely. Knitting isn't the simplest of tasks. Well thought out and nicely written. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Great job.
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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That poem came out nicely. Knitting isn't the simplest of tasks. Well thought out and nicely written. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Great job.
Comment Written 14-May-2013
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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Thank you sunnilicious. Nice to hear from you.
Comment from mikenbel
Looks like both you and your love have talent in the creative arts. This is another excellent example on your part. I can't even fathom the difficulty in bringing these elements together seamlessly.
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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Looks like both you and your love have talent in the creative arts. This is another excellent example on your part. I can't even fathom the difficulty in bringing these elements together seamlessly.
Comment Written 14-May-2013
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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Thank you mikenbel, from both of us.
Comment from Capricorn30
A beautiful craft to introduce a well-penned poem;
Thought-provoking words as life's cautious plans circle around creating colorful hopes of tomorrow;
I like the comparison of life and fine craftwork.
Your wife looks like a wonderful knitter; my mother at one time tried teaching me how to knit--the lessons did not go well!
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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A beautiful craft to introduce a well-penned poem;
Thought-provoking words as life's cautious plans circle around creating colorful hopes of tomorrow;
I like the comparison of life and fine craftwork.
Your wife looks like a wonderful knitter; my mother at one time tried teaching me how to knit--the lessons did not go well!
Comment Written 14-May-2013
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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Thank you Capricorn. Yes knitting befuddled my skills too!
Comment from ravenblack
really like your knitting metaphor, but can't picture you knitting ( just kidding, read the author notes). good use of the form, and if anyone gives you grief about plight//plight, just say "hey, it's a stanza break, stupid!I'm workin' with a theme, y'know." really like the lines " Plight that each soul is tightly drawn/ on a path of celestial hue".
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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really like your knitting metaphor, but can't picture you knitting ( just kidding, read the author notes). good use of the form, and if anyone gives you grief about plight//plight, just say "hey, it's a stanza break, stupid!I'm workin' with a theme, y'know." really like the lines " Plight that each soul is tightly drawn/ on a path of celestial hue".
Comment Written 14-May-2013
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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Thank you Ravenblack. I will definite use that when I need it,
Comment from Gungalo
True to sense of created plan
Man muddles along unknown, then
Again master wraps yarn he can
Span the twist 'til the next of when.
Wow Tom!! This is so wonderful. You told an awesome story while keeping to the plan. Man it is really good guy. I'm impressed!! So much so that this one deserves a six and it's getting it!!!
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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True to sense of created plan
Man muddles along unknown, then
Again master wraps yarn he can
Span the twist 'til the next of when.
Wow Tom!! This is so wonderful. You told an awesome story while keeping to the plan. Man it is really good guy. I'm impressed!! So much so that this one deserves a six and it's getting it!!!
Comment Written 14-May-2013
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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Wow! Thank you Gungalo. I am si pleased that you liked it! :-))
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Smile Tom.
