Reflections
Bulimia battles leave empty shadows5 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello to you Bathsheba
Nice meeting you here on Fanstory
Now here is a very good 5-7-5 entry
To me you are saying
with no image there is noting to see becuse somethin is hiden inside the heart
Gert
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Hello to you Bathsheba
Nice meeting you here on Fanstory
Now here is a very good 5-7-5 entry
To me you are saying
with no image there is noting to see becuse somethin is hiden inside the heart
Gert
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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That is exactly what I mean yes and thank you so much
Comment from NicciFaye
The last line was thought provoking. You really turned it around and gave us a surprise to the empty reflection and hollowed mirror hides grace. I would give it a six, but am all used up. God bless and continue to write.
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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The last line was thought provoking. You really turned it around and gave us a surprise to the empty reflection and hollowed mirror hides grace. I would give it a six, but am all used up. God bless and continue to write.
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Thank you so much :)
Comment from L. Sherman
If this is from personal experience, it takes great courage to post such a poem. If not, it's still a brave thing to do, given that it's such a sensitive topic. Definitely some deep emotions in this piece. One thing: I think you're a syllable shy in the second line. I'm only seeing 6.
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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If this is from personal experience, it takes great courage to post such a poem. If not, it's still a brave thing to do, given that it's such a sensitive topic. Definitely some deep emotions in this piece. One thing: I think you're a syllable shy in the second line. I'm only seeing 6.
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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very personal yes, but for now all battles are won. Hmmm I better check it lol, this is the first time I have done one like this and thank you
Comment from Sam Mendonca
Very nice 5-7-5 poem with deep emotions coming from the writer.
Suggestion- Maybe add a photo along with your poem to reflect the subject of from the poem. :D
Good luck in the contest. :D
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Very nice 5-7-5 poem with deep emotions coming from the writer.
Suggestion- Maybe add a photo along with your poem to reflect the subject of from the poem. :D
Good luck in the contest. :D
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Thank you and I am a newbie and did not know I could.
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Welcome :D
Looking forward to reading your work. :D
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Thank you so much, nice to meet you
Comment from poetic1988
This is a nice poem
I like how it flows
And I like the poem because
This is a poem I feel I can relate to
From reading this poem
I feel its about facing your demons facing your past
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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This is a nice poem
I like how it flows
And I like the poem because
This is a poem I feel I can relate to
From reading this poem
I feel its about facing your demons facing your past
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Yes it is, all battles can be won if we have the courage to see the ending results of it not being won and thank you
