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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Music is in my soul. I find myself singing along with the songs and foot tapping with the music. I used to go ballroom and sequence dancing a few years ago, I loved it, now its foot tapping, but still love to watch it. Nice one Treischel, and a pleasure to read. xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 03-May-2013
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Music is in my soul. I find myself singing along with the songs and foot tapping with the music. I used to go ballroom and sequence dancing a few years ago, I loved it, now its foot tapping, but still love to watch it. Nice one Treischel, and a pleasure to read. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 03-May-2013
reply by the author on 03-May-2013
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Thank you Sandra. Keep those toes tapping.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
I'm ready to tap my toes, Tom. Enjoyable read of your pentameter verse. Ten is a hard beat to make but you managed. Perfect count good beat and a lovely message. Nicely written and I think there is too much sex and violence on tv. then they wonder why the children go wild. I'm watching Smash, although it is dragging a bit. I'm more the Masterpiece tv fan. An enjoyable write. Smiles. Robin :)
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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I'm ready to tap my toes, Tom. Enjoyable read of your pentameter verse. Ten is a hard beat to make but you managed. Perfect count good beat and a lovely message. Nicely written and I think there is too much sex and violence on tv. then they wonder why the children go wild. I'm watching Smash, although it is dragging a bit. I'm more the Masterpiece tv fan. An enjoyable write. Smiles. Robin :)
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Thanks Robin. Smash is the least favorite of the bunch.
Comment from Indie Skreet
I can't say I'm best to comment as I rarely watch tv, but this poem surely rocks, even that is clear to me, great rhythm and rhyme is music to my ear, but every time I go for one, the bloody sixes disappear. Okay, should be 'have disappeared', but I claim unpoetic licence :) best Indie
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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I can't say I'm best to comment as I rarely watch tv, but this poem surely rocks, even that is clear to me, great rhythm and rhyme is music to my ear, but every time I go for one, the bloody sixes disappear. Okay, should be 'have disappeared', but I claim unpoetic licence :) best Indie
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Thanks Indie. I predict sixes in your future.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
I very much tend to agree with you...there is so much on TV that is nothing more than trash and they're paid good money to do it. Very nice poem that I enjoyed very much. I can't remember if I I've told you my book is on amazon.com. Janie read an excerpt from my book for Youtube. You might enjoy it. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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I very much tend to agree with you...there is so much on TV that is nothing more than trash and they're paid good money to do it. Very nice poem that I enjoyed very much. I can't remember if I I've told you my book is on amazon.com. Janie read an excerpt from my book for Youtube. You might enjoy it. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 01-May-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Congratulations on getting published Evelyn. I'll take a look. Thanks for you review.
Comment from Sam Mendonca
Excellent writing of this poem with great feelings coming from the author.
I have to tell you the music shows you mentioned are also my favorites. I'm not into crime and drama.
Nicley written. :D It brought a smile to my face.
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Excellent writing of this poem with great feelings coming from the author.
I have to tell you the music shows you mentioned are also my favorites. I'm not into crime and drama.
Nicley written. :D It brought a smile to my face.
Comment Written 01-May-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thank you Sam. I'm glad you enjoy them too. I really think the quality of talent is excellent this year.
Comment from Gungalo
So go, pull up the most comfortable chair,
And get ready to start those toes tappin'.
Take a brief moment to let down your hair,
And just see what the music makes happen.
Very good quatrains Tom and the story you tell within is good. I can't say the shows are good because I don't own a television set. LOL
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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So go, pull up the most comfortable chair,
And get ready to start those toes tappin'.
Take a brief moment to let down your hair,
And just see what the music makes happen.
Very good quatrains Tom and the story you tell within is good. I can't say the shows are good because I don't own a television set. LOL
Comment Written 01-May-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thank you so much Gungalo. I forone am a couch potato.
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LOL not me!!!
