Conversations in Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Sweet Symphony"NaPoWriMo 2013 - 30 poems in 30 days
10 total reviews
Comment from Carrie Carson
I like the pace and rhyme in this.
Musette, that's a new form to me, it's enjoyable. I think it could be the start, too, of a longer poem, just because it moves well. So you wouldn't have an actual musette, just something paced in similar fashion.
Great job with this, good luck in the contest. :) Carrrie
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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I like the pace and rhyme in this.
Musette, that's a new form to me, it's enjoyable. I think it could be the start, too, of a longer poem, just because it moves well. So you wouldn't have an actual musette, just something paced in similar fashion.
Great job with this, good luck in the contest. :) Carrrie
Comment Written 01-May-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Carrie.
Comment from 9999pool
A love more beautiful than the stars supreme, a love symphony reaching out to two people in a dream dance.
Good write and expressed well. Best wishes to the contest.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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A love more beautiful than the stars supreme, a love symphony reaching out to two people in a dream dance.
Good write and expressed well. Best wishes to the contest.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thank you for a wonderful review, Ritchie.
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Maybe this time is your turn to get lucky?
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A lot said in so few words. A beautiful love poem. I haven't seen this form before but really like it.
Our dream,
A symphony
Supreme,
This is beautiful~Debbie
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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A lot said in so few words. A beautiful love poem. I haven't seen this form before but really like it.
Our dream,
A symphony
Supreme,
This is beautiful~Debbie
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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I like to use shadowpoetry.com as a resource for discovering new types of poetry, that is where I found the Musette. Thanks for a great review, Debbie.
Comment from lorijean
A great poem of love without the use of all those lovey dovey words, I would find this hard to do with any conviction, well done and the imagery is perfect...
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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A great poem of love without the use of all those lovey dovey words, I would find this hard to do with any conviction, well done and the imagery is perfect...
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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I must admit it was harder than it sounded at first lol Thanks for the great review, lorijean.
Comment from Just2Write
This is a lovely poem, and fits the rules of the contest. I liked its brevity, and the fact that you still managed to work in rhymes. Very nicely done. Rose.
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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This is a lovely poem, and fits the rules of the contest. I liked its brevity, and the fact that you still managed to work in rhymes. Very nicely done. Rose.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thank you for a lovely review, Rose.
Comment from Staplesque
This is a very beautiful and enchanting poem. It fits the prompt perfectly, and I absolutely love this type of poem. Your writing flows nicely and is elegant and soothing. Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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This is a very beautiful and enchanting poem. It fits the prompt perfectly, and I absolutely love this type of poem. Your writing flows nicely and is elegant and soothing. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thank you for a delightful review. :)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
In this ultra-concise poem you have indeed undeniably indicated true love without using any forbidden words. Good use of metaphor
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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In this ultra-concise poem you have indeed undeniably indicated true love without using any forbidden words. Good use of metaphor
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thank you for your kind review, Janice.
Comment from NicciFaye
Great poem. Simple and straight. The picture is lovely. Not sure if I would have choose this picture to suite the poem. Descriptive words and meanings. Good luck and God bless.
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Great poem. Simple and straight. The picture is lovely. Not sure if I would have choose this picture to suite the poem. Descriptive words and meanings. Good luck and God bless.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thank you for your comments and review, NicciFaye. :)
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this beautiful musette, i will have to try this form. concrete imagery presented, dancing in the shadow of the moon in one's mind. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this beautiful musette, i will have to try this form. concrete imagery presented, dancing in the shadow of the moon in one's mind. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thank you for the great review, sweetwoodjax. :)
Comment from adewpearl
I like the form of this style
strong rhymes in each tercet
good alliterative pairing in closed/composed
and in symphony supreme
you create a lovely scene and a pretty romantic mood :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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I like the form of this style
strong rhymes in each tercet
good alliterative pairing in closed/composed
and in symphony supreme
you create a lovely scene and a pretty romantic mood :-) Brooke
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you for a lovely review, Brooke. :)
