Joseph
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Joseph Part 2 The Dream"The story of Joseph told in verse.
13 total reviews
Comment from dmt1967
Another great chapter I like it very much I like the seven fat cows and seven thin cows and what they mean very well planned out thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Another great chapter I like it very much I like the seven fat cows and seven thin cows and what they mean very well planned out thank you for sharing
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Thanks you. =}
Comment from barkingdog
Continuing with the story. I thing children would like this way of telling it. It's easy to understand and the rhyme adds interest.
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Continuing with the story. I thing children would like this way of telling it. It's easy to understand and the rhyme adds interest.
Comment Written 01-May-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thank you.
Comment from Writingfundimension
It occurs to me as I'm reading this that your poem would be an excellent way to introduce the story of Joseph to children in bible study. The rhymes, once again, work very well for me. I enjoyed your write, Rox.
Hugs, Bev
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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It occurs to me as I'm reading this that your poem would be an excellent way to introduce the story of Joseph to children in bible study. The rhymes, once again, work very well for me. I enjoyed your write, Rox.
Hugs, Bev
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you, Bev. It is one of my favorite stories. Rox
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Another six but I don't have one. Very good Roxie. The story of Joseph continues. You seem to have a talent for telling stories in poetry form. You have been motivated and you are doing a good job. Nancy
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Another six but I don't have one. Very good Roxie. The story of Joseph continues. You seem to have a talent for telling stories in poetry form. You have been motivated and you are doing a good job. Nancy
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thanks so much Nancy.
Comment from God's Writer
Again a wonderful poem my dear friend. I found this poem to also be a wonderful sermon. It gives me great peace to know God is such a caring God.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Again a wonderful poem my dear friend. I found this poem to also be a wonderful sermon. It gives me great peace to know God is such a caring God.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you Erick.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend again this is very well written the story of Joseph I remember in school performing in the musical Joseph well done aging my friend regards Jill
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Yes my friend again this is very well written the story of Joseph I remember in school performing in the musical Joseph well done aging my friend regards Jill
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you Jill, rox
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
The dream explanation is nice, the essence of prosperity and poverty indicated and forecasted, I liked the story of wisdom and moral, good narrative taletelling with good stanza/couplet in rhymes, soft and simple. 2/304
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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The dream explanation is nice, the essence of prosperity and poverty indicated and forecasted, I liked the story of wisdom and moral, good narrative taletelling with good stanza/couplet in rhymes, soft and simple. 2/304
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thanks so much. Rox
Comment from CR Delport
A nice poem that is well written and have love art work to go with it. Sometimes I wonder how it must have been living in those times. Couldnt be any more scary than the world we live in today.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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A nice poem that is well written and have love art work to go with it. Sometimes I wonder how it must have been living in those times. Couldnt be any more scary than the world we live in today.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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I think it may be scarier today. =] Thank you much. Rox
Comment from Nikitaboopathi.Kalai
Perfect rhyming and lovely words. It's amazing. Great picture of wonderful art. No words to say anything more about this wonderful poem. Good work! Keep it up!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Perfect rhyming and lovely words. It's amazing. Great picture of wonderful art. No words to say anything more about this wonderful poem. Good work! Keep it up!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thanks so much.
Comment from chasennov
'Joseph Part 2 The Dream.' There really are no stories like stories from the Holy Bible. Your story, in poem form, I thought, was absolutely great. Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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'Joseph Part 2 The Dream.' There really are no stories like stories from the Holy Bible. Your story, in poem form, I thought, was absolutely great. Well done.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you, this is one of my favorites. Rox
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You're very welcome, Rox.