You Are My
A Contest Entry23 total reviews
Comment from woxlly20
Very intrigue by the way you carried your poem. You don't have to use the word "LOVE" in the poem to show that person what he or she means to one another. The picture says it all. Great work:)
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Very intrigue by the way you carried your poem. You don't have to use the word "LOVE" in the poem to show that person what he or she means to one another. The picture says it all. Great work:)
Comment Written 04-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank you so very much~Debbie
Comment from tedanytime
These lines are very fine, dancing from stanza to stanza with sweet words and thoughts.
Rock, willow, waterfall, sun, clouds, moon stars, flowers, morning, songbird, ocean, down, night, reflection... expressive words that fill each stanza with strong acknowledgement of loved one.
Very very nice!
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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These lines are very fine, dancing from stanza to stanza with sweet words and thoughts.
Rock, willow, waterfall, sun, clouds, moon stars, flowers, morning, songbird, ocean, down, night, reflection... expressive words that fill each stanza with strong acknowledgement of loved one.
Very very nice!
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank you so very much~Debbie
Comment from dmt1967
When reading this poem I felt saddens my friend but also warmth I hope this means you are feeling better good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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When reading this poem I felt saddens my friend but also warmth I hope this means you are feeling better good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Feeling much better and once again all our snow has melted, and I think spring may be here! Debbie
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Debbie,
Your poem is precious and covers almost any expression of love I can conceive. The poem has an excellent texture to the words. Your choice of color scheme, font, format and graphics makes it a delightful piece. I enjoyed reviewing the work.
Curtis
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Debbie,
Your poem is precious and covers almost any expression of love I can conceive. The poem has an excellent texture to the words. Your choice of color scheme, font, format and graphics makes it a delightful piece. I enjoyed reviewing the work.
Curtis
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank you so very much, Curtis. I am glad you enjoyed it~Debbie
Comment from bob cullen
This is the most beautiful expression of love I've read in a long time.
While I'm a lover of traditional poetry (read rhyme and meter) I found this verse enchanting with a rhythm all its own. It contains a fantastic message and it left me wishing I could write something so meaningful
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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This is the most beautiful expression of love I've read in a long time.
While I'm a lover of traditional poetry (read rhyme and meter) I found this verse enchanting with a rhythm all its own. It contains a fantastic message and it left me wishing I could write something so meaningful
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank you, Bob. I truly appreciate your beautiful review~Debbie
Comment from Black_Oxygen
This is beautiful Love Poetry. I like the way that the
words are arranged on the page. The emotions are intense
and the passion is sincere. The attached illustration is
a befitting accent that enhances the message. Thank You
for your creation.
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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This is beautiful Love Poetry. I like the way that the
words are arranged on the page. The emotions are intense
and the passion is sincere. The attached illustration is
a befitting accent that enhances the message. Thank You
for your creation.
Comment Written 01-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank you so very much, My friend~Debbie
Comment from Shirley B
Dear Author, I really enjoyed your poem. I like the way your first line describes what your lover means to you then in perfect imagery, you describe in beautiful detail why. My favorite verse is 'you are my reflection in a still pond which mirrors the truth of life.' Best of luck in the contest, Shirley
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Dear Author, I really enjoyed your poem. I like the way your first line describes what your lover means to you then in perfect imagery, you describe in beautiful detail why. My favorite verse is 'you are my reflection in a still pond which mirrors the truth of life.' Best of luck in the contest, Shirley
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank you so much, Shirley for your most kind review and stars~Debbie
Comment from L. Sherman
For some reason, I wanted to start singing "you are my sunshine, my only sunshine"... Anyway, I love how you liken your love to so many things that are slightly unconventional or at least out of the box. It's not overly sappy but belays a definite feeling of love and appreciation. So, a success!
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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For some reason, I wanted to start singing "you are my sunshine, my only sunshine"... Anyway, I love how you liken your love to so many things that are slightly unconventional or at least out of the box. It's not overly sappy but belays a definite feeling of love and appreciation. So, a success!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank you so very much~Debbie
Comment from nancyjam
this is quite a beautiful love
poem and a wonderful entry in the
contest.
I love the metaphors you use
to describe the importance of this
person in your life.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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this is quite a beautiful love
poem and a wonderful entry in the
contest.
I love the metaphors you use
to describe the importance of this
person in your life.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you!
Comment from RYME4U
You have done this poem quite well. The list of things "you are" is nicely expressed and well thought out.I like the way you have presented this free verse love poem. Good job
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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You have done this poem quite well. The list of things "you are" is nicely expressed and well thought out.I like the way you have presented this free verse love poem. Good job
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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thank you!
