Conversations in Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Meeting Mister Shakespeare"NaPoWriMo 2013 - 30 poems in 30 days
10 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
It's time for us to learn from him and write our own--so I guess he has spoken through his sonnets. A little fun and tongue-in-cheek in your piece.
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It's time for us to learn from him and write our own--so I guess he has spoken through his sonnets. A little fun and tongue-in-cheek in your piece.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
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Thank you for a fantastic review, BeasPeas.
Comment from Nebukadneser
Now this is what I call brilliant to the extreme! I absolutely loved it, my friend. I salute your talent and am in awe of the cleverness of this writ.
Cool
Good luck with the competition
You rock, my friend
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Now this is what I call brilliant to the extreme! I absolutely loved it, my friend. I salute your talent and am in awe of the cleverness of this writ.
Cool
Good luck with the competition
You rock, my friend
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thank you for this enthusiastic and fun review.
Comment from RYME4U
Excellent. This is so well done ...the artwork, the title... everything!The rhythm is great and you chose such an appropriate quote from one of his sonnets. I loved this one.
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Excellent. This is so well done ...the artwork, the title... everything!The rhythm is great and you chose such an appropriate quote from one of his sonnets. I loved this one.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Ryme4u. I appreciate the fantastic comments.
Comment from bhogg
Cleverly written in correct form. I know this is a literary site, but nice to be able to accompany post with appropriate artwork. Good luck in your contest. Bill
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Cleverly written in correct form. I know this is a literary site, but nice to be able to accompany post with appropriate artwork. Good luck in your contest. Bill
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
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Thanks for a grand review, Bill.
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in good syllable count and structure for the tetractys
good alliterative pairing in speak and sonnets
good assonance of long E sounds in speak to me
I like the way you incorporate a line from Shakespeare's sonnet into your poem :-) Brooke
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Your poem is in good syllable count and structure for the tetractys
good alliterative pairing in speak and sonnets
good assonance of long E sounds in speak to me
I like the way you incorporate a line from Shakespeare's sonnet into your poem :-) Brooke
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much, Brooke.
Comment from CR Delport
When I was at school it took my a long while to fully understand and comprehend the masterful craft of Shakespeare's writing. Nice poem with lovely art work. Now I am thirsty :)
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When I was at school it took my a long while to fully understand and comprehend the masterful craft of Shakespeare's writing. Nice poem with lovely art work. Now I am thirsty :)
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
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Thanks for a great review.
Comment from Capricorn30
A well-penned Shakespeare themed poem, mystery poet--I very much enjoyed reading a great contest entry;
Nice alliteration in the title smoothly continues to flow throughout the poem, as today's poet unites with yesterday's bard.
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A well-penned Shakespeare themed poem, mystery poet--I very much enjoyed reading a great contest entry;
Nice alliteration in the title smoothly continues to flow throughout the poem, as today's poet unites with yesterday's bard.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much.
Comment from rjuselius
Speak
To me
Through sonnets
Mister Shakespeare
"Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?"
this is a pretty witty piece of poetry! i love the quote.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
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Speak
To me
Through sonnets
Mister Shakespeare
"Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?"
this is a pretty witty piece of poetry! i love the quote.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thank you for a great review, rebekka. :)
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this tetractys poem about the words of william shakespeare. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this tetractys poem about the words of william shakespeare. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
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Thank you for a great review, sweetwoodjax. :)
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
I very much like the picture you provided and the colour scheme arranged. It was amusing the way you addressed Mr Shakespeare! A great little poem - Giddy
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I very much like the picture you provided and the colour scheme arranged. It was amusing the way you addressed Mr Shakespeare! A great little poem - Giddy
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
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Thank you for a delightful review, Giddy. :)
