Conversations in Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Conversing With Emily"NaPoWriMo 2013 - 30 poems in 30 days
6 total reviews
Comment from honeytree
I really liked the art work and the words written.
I feel their are many within our world today
Are finding it is hard to make ends meet.
Many of us on earth find it hard to live
We should help when we can, to feed those who are hungry.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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I really liked the art work and the words written.
I feel their are many within our world today
Are finding it is hard to make ends meet.
Many of us on earth find it hard to live
We should help when we can, to feed those who are hungry.
Honey tree
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review, honeytree.
Comment from Rondeno
This voyage in the good ship Emily reminded me of Keats's journeys of the imagination - "Much have I traveled in the realms of gold ..." Beautiful.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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This voyage in the good ship Emily reminded me of Keats's journeys of the imagination - "Much have I traveled in the realms of gold ..." Beautiful.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thank so much for the review and quote by Keats :)
Comment from adewpearl
I like the way you incorporate Emily's words into your poem
solid use of rhyme
This is a thoughtful tribute to the power of poetry to transport us to better places when we are fed up with the hum drum mundane nature of our actual lives :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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I like the way you incorporate Emily's words into your poem
solid use of rhyme
This is a thoughtful tribute to the power of poetry to transport us to better places when we are fed up with the hum drum mundane nature of our actual lives :-) Brooke
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Exactly what I was going for. :) Thanks, Brooke.
Comment from Frank Atwood
All writing is an escape/vacation from the hum drum of life. Whether writing poetry or a novel, through writing we also learn truths about life that's only perceived through ones soul. A soul hidden deep within us, that's enlightened through a thought process not tied to this world, but to the next and through the words of this world, we learn worlds of truths not taught by men, through those quiet moments within our mind at that time.
Very good and quite different. Keep up the great writing. God bless
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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All writing is an escape/vacation from the hum drum of life. Whether writing poetry or a novel, through writing we also learn truths about life that's only perceived through ones soul. A soul hidden deep within us, that's enlightened through a thought process not tied to this world, but to the next and through the words of this world, we learn worlds of truths not taught by men, through those quiet moments within our mind at that time.
Very good and quite different. Keep up the great writing. God bless
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the exceptional six stars and lengthy review. :)
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, dovey, you did an excellent job writing this poetic conversation with emily dickinson about her works. i enjoyed reading it. great picture too
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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this is very well written, dovey, you did an excellent job writing this poetic conversation with emily dickinson about her works. i enjoyed reading it. great picture too
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thank you, sweetwoodjax. I appreciate the kind comments and review.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Great artwork for your conversation with Emily poem. Your second verse rings so true wherever you live nowadays, the pressure of the economy etc. nothing better than to delve into a book. I've really enjoyed this poetry challenge, though must admit felt stressed at times when the mind has gone blank.This is a very clever idea and a good read.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Great artwork for your conversation with Emily poem. Your second verse rings so true wherever you live nowadays, the pressure of the economy etc. nothing better than to delve into a book. I've really enjoyed this poetry challenge, though must admit felt stressed at times when the mind has gone blank.This is a very clever idea and a good read.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thank you very much, Pearl. Stanzas two and four belong to me, and one and three, of course, to Emily. I may explore this technique further... wouldn't it be wonderful to have a Poet's Round Table, of sorts, with a selection of the greats? Love that idea! Thanks for a wonderful review.
