Comment from honeytree

Excellent

Maybe we have met Karma in some form on earth.

When we help someone we can become uplifted.

On the other hand when we are selfish, we feel unhappy.

We all have a choice on our journey on earth

To be selfish or help and care for others and ourselves.

Honey tree

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013

Thank you, honeytree. :)

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

This is a lovely senryu suite. Three separate verses Karma - yes or no. Kindness - bringing sunshine in and bad attitude - storm clouds. A good read, well thought out.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013

Thank you for a great review, Pearl. :)

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

I like these three senryus linked together to explain Karma. I like your personification of Karma and saying that she's 'redundant running in circles.'(LOL)(also, a very good alliteration)
Then your final two show what a positive or negative frame of mind can result in.
Nicely done and very visual.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013

Thank you for your detailed and complimentary review, barking dog. :)

Comment from lorijean

Excellent

A lovely poem, Karma what a soothing place to me, your words were calming too, and the artwork is just perfect, thank you for sharing....

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013

Thank you for a lovely review, lorijean.