Conversations in Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Winter Personified"NaPoWriMo 2013 - 30 poems in 30 days
5 total reviews
Comment from honeytree
The name winter makes me feel cold.
I guess this witch likes us to be cold
Turns any type of heat away.
The heat is turned up to keep us warm
By someone who knows it is very cold.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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The name winter makes me feel cold.
I guess this witch likes us to be cold
Turns any type of heat away.
The heat is turned up to keep us warm
By someone who knows it is very cold.
Honey tree
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is great artwork that compliments your winter's woe perfectly. Love the final line, sounds almost like you are shouting it out loud.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
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This is great artwork that compliments your winter's woe perfectly. Love the final line, sounds almost like you are shouting it out loud.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
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Pearl,
That is just as I intended. I am shouting for winter to leave lol. Thanks for a great review. :)
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Great ise of word imagery and a very good choice of picture.
Even though she is portrayed as a witch there still sems to be something magical about winter and I feel you have captured this also.
I really enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
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Great ise of word imagery and a very good choice of picture.
Even though she is portrayed as a witch there still sems to be something magical about winter and I feel you have captured this also.
I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
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At the beginning of winter she is memerizing... approaching 8 months later, it is really time for her to leave lol Thanks for a wonderful review, seken.
Comment from dragonpoet
We need Glenda the Good Witch of Spring. I like the picture in show us kids handle winter better than adults.
I like the flow of this acrostic poem. I think if you put 'whose' on the second line you will have close to a monorhyme poem. Soul would be a slant rhyme.
keep writing
dragonoet
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
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We need Glenda the Good Witch of Spring. I like the picture in show us kids handle winter better than adults.
I like the flow of this acrostic poem. I think if you put 'whose' on the second line you will have close to a monorhyme poem. Soul would be a slant rhyme.
keep writing
dragonoet
Comment Written 26-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
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I appreciate your suggestions. If I did that it would no longer be an acrostic, as it spells Winter with the first letters in each line. Thank you for your nice review.
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I realized that after I posted and reread the poem. Sorry.
dragonpoet
Comment from lorijean
Well written a goods wintry feel, and yes we all want her to disappear and give way the her sister Spring, nice poem, thanks for sharing....
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
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Well written a goods wintry feel, and yes we all want her to disappear and give way the her sister Spring, nice poem, thanks for sharing....
Comment Written 26-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
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Thank you for your kind review, lorijean. :)
