Conversations in Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "A Call To Spring"NaPoWriMo 2013 - 30 poems in 30 days
8 total reviews
Comment from honeytree
I love the art work and the words.
A beautiful sunny day can uplift us all.
Most of us can feel the sun warming our body
Our sad thoughts move on we don't need them
Particularly when we are in love with someone.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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I love the art work and the words.
A beautiful sunny day can uplift us all.
Most of us can feel the sun warming our body
Our sad thoughts move on we don't need them
Particularly when we are in love with someone.
Honey tree
Comment Written 24-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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Thank you for a grand review, honeytree. :)
Comment from DragonSkulls
Excellent little Triolet you've penned here, Kim. We actually went to the beach this last weekend. I live down in Florida. You say you have more snow in the forecast? Yikes. I'm glad I'm down here, lol. Great little poem, K. Have a great day. Hope it stays sunny. =] /Ron
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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Excellent little Triolet you've penned here, Kim. We actually went to the beach this last weekend. I live down in Florida. You say you have more snow in the forecast? Yikes. I'm glad I'm down here, lol. Great little poem, K. Have a great day. Hope it stays sunny. =] /Ron
Comment Written 24-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Ron! I live in Alaska, so we're no strangers to the snow lol Spring keeps teasing us... we had a warm (by our standards) February and an unseasonably cold March, which has extended into April. Beach... so jealous! lol But you can keep your hurricanes lol I guess its all a tradeoff one way or another. Thanks for an awesome review. Kim
Comment from Earl of Oxford
'Luxuriating' sounds like a naughty sexual act to me, Kim, but I am a weirdo.
Hmm...so you wanted to be 'led astray', eh? I'll meet you under the sun in five minutes...if it's shining in Alaska at the moment.
Nice one.
Cheers, Ray
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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'Luxuriating' sounds like a naughty sexual act to me, Kim, but I am a weirdo.
Hmm...so you wanted to be 'led astray', eh? I'll meet you under the sun in five minutes...if it's shining in Alaska at the moment.
Nice one.
Cheers, Ray
Comment Written 24-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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lol Snowing today, Ray. All my sunshine went away :( Thanks for the review that made me laugh.
*hugs*
Kim
Comment from Creative77
What a lovely poem! We could all use a little spring right now, and your words have certainly helped. Nice job! Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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What a lovely poem! We could all use a little spring right now, and your words have certainly helped. Nice job! Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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Thank you for a wonderful review. :)
Comment from lorijean
Sweet poem, well written heralding in Spring, wonderful nature give us so much to write about, it makes it so easy, love the picture too
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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Sweet poem, well written heralding in Spring, wonderful nature give us so much to write about, it makes it so easy, love the picture too
Comment Written 24-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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Thank you for a fantastic review, lorijean. :)
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Love the bright setting with the little fairy on the tree, it really does remind you of the colours of spring, after dull days. Your repeating line is lovely, gives one the feel of waiting for someone special.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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Love the bright setting with the little fairy on the tree, it really does remind you of the colours of spring, after dull days. Your repeating line is lovely, gives one the feel of waiting for someone special.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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Thank you for an awesome review, Pearl. :)
Comment from 9999pool
Waiting for the sunshine to warm up our tired bodies. Te renew and to refresh basking in the bright and beautiful day. Aday to relax and while the time away looking silly and musing.
Good write in a Triolet. The repeating lines sounded very melodious and poetically sweet too.
Well done! bravo!
Cheerio, Ritchie.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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Waiting for the sunshine to warm up our tired bodies. Te renew and to refresh basking in the bright and beautiful day. Aday to relax and while the time away looking silly and musing.
Good write in a Triolet. The repeating lines sounded very melodious and poetically sweet too.
Well done! bravo!
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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Thank you, Ritchie :) It was my first Triolet. :)
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Hi Kim,
Good triolet. I did one but not without the usual problems of rhyming scheme that went astray. After correction it became excellent (blowing my horn a little).
Cheers, Ritchie.
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What is the title? I'll give it a look. :)
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That little Triolet is called "Should I live" and it had gone through many changes and it read very different from the original one, smiles. But nonetheless a good entertainng read with many questions too (the usual Ritchie fare so to speak).
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The title is "If I should live" and you can copy and paste this link to find it:
http://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?id=599444
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment from Dean Kuch
This was beautiful and so well crafted. I must admit, I don't know a Triolet from a Sonnet, but I DO know what I like. And I know I like this!
It's uplifting prose and lighthearted, simplistic nature makes this a true pleasure to read as well as review.
Kudos...
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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This was beautiful and so well crafted. I must admit, I don't know a Triolet from a Sonnet, but I DO know what I like. And I know I like this!
It's uplifting prose and lighthearted, simplistic nature makes this a true pleasure to read as well as review.
Kudos...
Comment Written 24-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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Thank you for a most wonderful review, Dean. :)
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You are most welcome.
