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Conversations in Poetry

Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "haiku (on Earth Day revere)"
NaPoWriMo 2013 - 30 poems in 30 days

5 total reviews 
Comment from honeytree
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

The art work is great.

I feel a child should not only love their mother,father

and siblings. They should help them as well when in need.

Let our love flow.

Honey tree



 Comment Written 24-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
    Thank you for this exceptional review, honeytree. :)
Comment from adewpearl
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beautiful pairing of art and poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 form
revere - the perfect verb choice
you convey a most thoughtful message, and I very much like the mother/child imagery :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
    Thanks, Brooke. :) I appreciate your detailed review. Kim
Comment from 9999pool
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Beautiful haiku for earth Day. Nature's sheen and pristine glory was bequeathed to us. Nurture it and protect it with all our hearts. It is never too late to care and make a difference to save mother nature.
Excellent write and expressed with a subtle passion.
Cheerio, Ritchie.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
    Thanks, Ritchie. :) Your review finds the deeper meaning to the haiku.
reply by 9999pool on 23-Apr-2013
    Welcome. A beautiful haiku befitting of Earth Day! Cheers, Ritchie.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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A nice combination the potted plant for mother and Earth day thoughts. Mother earth needs all the love and care that our own mother's do.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
    Thank you, Pearl.
Comment from PhilThePoet
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A nice haiku about Earth Day. You stick to the syllable count and display a nice sentiment in few words. The picture is suitable for the piece. Good work!

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2013
    Thank you very much, Phil. :)