Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Lovely photo of you against this snowy mountain range. You cover the seasons well in this poem and you have managed to combine nature and the wonder of the lover in this poem with your words of embrace and yearning.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2013

Thank you for a wonderful review, Pearl.

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Creatively original with expressive word pictures that aid the reader in empathizing with the person the adverse weather effects upon us. Interesting word combinations with a meaningful ending.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2013

Thank you for your kind words and review, GracieAnn.

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Very good Dovey. I do think though that the creator of this form should be credited. Her name was Joree Williams. Thanks you did a bang up job of it.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2013

Thank you for the kind comments... are you sure about Joree Williams? Here is how shadowpoetry.com where I discovered that type of poetry lists it:



Parallelogram de Crystalline


Parallelogram de Crystalline is a poetry form created by Karan Naidu. This form consists of 4 verses of 3 lines each. The syllable count for each stanza is 3, 6, 9. In this style of poem, the beauty of a lover is compared with the nature and described...

Thanks,

Kim

reply by Gungalo on 22-Apr-2013

Well I was sure till you showed me that. Joree told me herself before she died it was hers. Who knows. You are probably best to list no ones name with it. LOL. I'll try to get to the bottom of it. Thanks you.

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2013

Glad I could help. You can read it for yourself at www.shadowpoetry.com It is the only place I've ever seen that style listed. Well, and the one I go to the most, because the site is so comprehensive. Have a great evening.

Kim

reply by Gungalo on 22-Apr-2013

Thanks Dovey.

Comment from Earl of Oxford

Excellent

Hi, Kim.

Maybe 'loosen', though 'lessen' works fine - just me being a picky smart-arse. :-)

You've persuaded me my eyes are getting old, as I have trouble reading the black on blue.

Top alliteration in 'embrace breakup'

I really like 'summer's fling' too.

Nice one.

Happy Sunday to you and Alaska.

Cheers, Ray

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013

Thanks, Ray. :) I'm off to work... Happy Sunday, indeed! lol :) Hope you have a wonderful day. Perhaps I'll go lighten up that blue just a bit and make it easier to read?

*hugs*

Kim

reply by Earl of Oxford on 21-Apr-2013

Just checked it out, Kim, and it's much clearer now. xx

Comment from lorijean

Excellent

A nice poem, we all long for Spring to break after the long haul of Winter, well constructed and the photograph is just right for the job......

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013

Thank you for a wonderful review, lorijean. :)

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this si very well written, dovey, you did an excellent job writing this parallelogram poem about the fickle heart that likes all seasons. i enjoyed reading this one...

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013

Thanks for the kind comments and review, sweetwoodjax. :)

Comment from 9999pool

Excellent

Such a beautiful state with the snowy ice caps in the background. A state with with 4 seasons of a different kind - funny and a good write about the break-up and the hot up.
Excellent write and such a lovey dovey poem indeed.
Would be good to go there for an icey holidya.
Cheerio, Ritchie.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013

Loved the review. :)

Hope you have a wonderful day, Ritchie.

reply by 9999pool on 21-Apr-2013

You too dear. Cheerio, Ritchie.

reply by 9999pool on 21-Apr-2013

You too dear. Cheerio, Ritchie.