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Comment from Sararb
Very descriptive poem that you have written of a storm in the making. Your poem flowed well and the rhyming fell into place naturally. The photo that you added was a perfect match for this poem. I see you are still having snowstorms in Colorado. We are having unusually cool temps here in Louisiana too. Sararb :)
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2013
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Very descriptive poem that you have written of a storm in the making. Your poem flowed well and the rhyming fell into place naturally. The photo that you added was a perfect match for this poem. I see you are still having snowstorms in Colorado. We are having unusually cool temps here in Louisiana too. Sararb :)
Comment Written 19-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2013
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Thanks Sara, hopefully well have Summer soon.
Comment from trimple
A well written poem that most certainly delivers food for thought given the social unrest and our current climate.
This type of poetry I find great to read but difficult to get right.
Thanks for sharing your concerning thoughts.
Kind regards
tracey
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2013
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A well written poem that most certainly delivers food for thought given the social unrest and our current climate.
This type of poetry I find great to read but difficult to get right.
Thanks for sharing your concerning thoughts.
Kind regards
tracey
Comment Written 19-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2013
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Thank you Tracey. I love that Triolet format.
Comment from Indie Skreet
definitely proclaims we have sinned - well not me of course, because you know me Tom. This is a good write and does sort of sound like the almighty is punishing everyone else, other than me, with his thunder. best Indie
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2013
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definitely proclaims we have sinned - well not me of course, because you know me Tom. This is a good write and does sort of sound like the almighty is punishing everyone else, other than me, with his thunder. best Indie
Comment Written 19-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2013
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Thank Indie. Yes, of course I consider you exempt.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend this is well written so much imagery and feeling enclosed in this short poem I enjoyed well done my friend regards Jill
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2013
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Yes my friend this is well written so much imagery and feeling enclosed in this short poem I enjoyed well done my friend regards Jill
Comment Written 19-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2013
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Thanks Jill. Strange times.
Comment from lorijean
Very strong message, there certainly are troubled skies, in more ways than one, especially with current events, the world has gone crazy....
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2013
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Very strong message, there certainly are troubled skies, in more ways than one, especially with current events, the world has gone crazy....
Comment Written 19-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2013
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Thank you lorijean for reading and reviewing.
