Comment from 9999pool

Excellent

Good serenade to a hubby who have been faithful, loving and amazingly understanding.
In continuing the love story of a blissful couple, life must be very lovely and contented.
A great write in a few words.
Cheerio, Ritchie.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013

Thanks for a great review, Ritchie. :)

reply by 9999pool on 21-Apr-2013

Thanks for sharing. Ritchie.

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

The art work is superb.

If we share our love in special ways

Real love won't die but grow more and more.

Honey tree

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2013

Thank you. I just knew I had to do something with that pic.

reply by honeytree on 22-Apr-2013

I am glad you liked the review.
I enjoyed reading what you wrote.

Honey tree

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

it's not quite an essence poem.

continue and you rhyme yes, but continue is at the beginning word of line 1. you need you to rhyme with something between the first and last word.

Example...

Orion studs the sky
as tulip buds grow high.

The confusion is that there are so many bad examples across the net including my favourite site, shadowpoetry.com which is where all the confusion sets in.

I's fix it.
I've got poems i'm fixing to.
regards
tia

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2013

I'll have to think about this one lol since Continue is 3 syllables, that technically puts it in the center of the 6 syllable line, that's what I was shooting for lol I can see you are giving great advice already and I thank you, Tia.

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Love the artwork you have chosen for this essence poem, it is perfect, or I could say timeless. Lovely words I had to read it twice to hear the internal rhyme, very clever and a lovely romantic sentiment.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2013

Thank you for a lovely review, Pearl. :)

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes this is well written I find it so hard to write about these short forms I am sure your husband loves you and appreciates all you do regards Jill

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2013

Thank you for your kind comments and taking the time to review, Jill. :)

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Hi Dovey,

Lovely sentiment in these lines. So very simple word choices yet they pack a great deal of love within them.
Thanks for sharing it - a nice read.
Maureen

"James, you amazingly
continue loving me."

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2013

Thank you for a lovely review, Maureen. :)