senryu (therapist suggests)
it might work10 total reviews
Comment from ~Dovey
You picked a very unique perspective to explore in this senryu. It sounds like a country song lol Good job on your syllable count. Best of luck in this contest. :)
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You picked a very unique perspective to explore in this senryu. It sounds like a country song lol Good job on your syllable count. Best of luck in this contest. :)
Comment Written 19-Apr-2013
Comment from sgalletti
Hah! I am LOVING this contest (although I didn't enter!). How fabulous to read a proper senryu prompt. I love this kform and am looking for some flow in the lines and great satire and irony, no seasonal word or kigo. It is a thrill to see so many titled correctly! Love the strong woman lassooing the tractor. Best of luck in the contest. Sue
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Hah! I am LOVING this contest (although I didn't enter!). How fabulous to read a proper senryu prompt. I love this kform and am looking for some flow in the lines and great satire and irony, no seasonal word or kigo. It is a thrill to see so many titled correctly! Love the strong woman lassooing the tractor. Best of luck in the contest. Sue
Comment Written 18-Apr-2013
Comment from AnonymousWisdom
Fits contest syllable count.
Made me smile a little.
I enjoyed reading.
Good job and good luck in the contest!
...Pray for Boston... :(
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Fits contest syllable count.
Made me smile a little.
I enjoyed reading.
Good job and good luck in the contest!
...Pray for Boston... :(
Comment Written 18-Apr-2013
Comment from Rmocruz
Perhaps reverse cowgirl would be more effective.
A very clever, humorous brief verse. An appropriate
picture reinforces the intended message.
An entertaining read.
Rich.
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Perhaps reverse cowgirl would be more effective.
A very clever, humorous brief verse. An appropriate
picture reinforces the intended message.
An entertaining read.
Rich.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2013
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend and yes it did make me smile very creative indeed and I enjoyed good luck in the contest regards Jill
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Yes this is well written my friend and yes it did make me smile very creative indeed and I enjoyed good luck in the contest regards Jill
Comment Written 18-Apr-2013
Comment from Maureen's Pen
This is such a fun work, great word play and your last line was a beauty - fabulous post.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck.
Maureen
"therapist suggests
you should act more sexy
to a tractor " // LOL
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This is such a fun work, great word play and your last line was a beauty - fabulous post.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck.
Maureen
"therapist suggests
you should act more sexy
to a tractor " // LOL
Comment Written 18-Apr-2013
Comment from mauial
This is quite funny. However, I really don't see this as a true statement about human nature. It is a nice play on words though in the last line.
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This is quite funny. However, I really don't see this as a true statement about human nature. It is a nice play on words though in the last line.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2013
Comment from Pierre Francis
A fun read, start to finish! Has a tongue-in-cheek dig at psychotherapy, and the pic - though not quite bang-on - does reflect the personification of a tractor. Good job. Lighthearted, yet incisive.
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A fun read, start to finish! Has a tongue-in-cheek dig at psychotherapy, and the pic - though not quite bang-on - does reflect the personification of a tractor. Good job. Lighthearted, yet incisive.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2013
Comment from wiljacro
HI! This is a really clever and funny play on words, had me smiling justlooking at the artwork, then laughing as I read the last line. Good Luck in this comp. wiljacro.
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HI! This is a really clever and funny play on words, had me smiling justlooking at the artwork, then laughing as I read the last line. Good Luck in this comp. wiljacro.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2013
Comment from dmt1967
This poem made me chuckle I did like the picture as well very nice the girl dancing sexily with the tractor was so cool thank you for sharing
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This poem made me chuckle I did like the picture as well very nice the girl dancing sexily with the tractor was so cool thank you for sharing
Comment Written 18-Apr-2013
