Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

This black and red bleeding heart setting tells well the story of the hope for love, that as yet hasn't been found.Good rhyme and rhythm to your verses. A good read.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

Thanks Pearl your review means a lot :) Jaq xx

Comment from GWinterwin

Excellent

This is a very good poem, although it is very sad. Your rhyming and word flow are good and tell a story of one wanting love to last but it seems to continually slip away. Oh so sad but very realistic.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

Ahhhh GW it does always seem to slip away from my touch. Thanks for reading an reviewing :) Jaq xx

Comment from donaldww

Excellent

Love is a pain. So sayeth the poet. Heart and soul are scythed (ouch!) then sutured (I've had better days).

Yes, love is the achilles heel. Here today, and gone in 24 hours. LOL

Cheers,
DW

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

LOL I know that feeling only too well, love of the transient kind Donlad. Thanks for your review. :) Jaq xx

Comment from reconciled

Excellent

That is one of my favorite songs.....I was gonna write something....but.... couldn't....can't listen to it all the way without...wishin' I were dead....-ha ha- wonderful write girl....hope your okay love Michael

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

Ahhh Michael I'm fine and I hope the same for you too. Thanks for your words, love ya Jaq xx

Comment from mikenbel

Excellent

Cute on the author's notes. I was wondering if in line one stanza one you were looking for "careening" instead of "careering"? This is very well written and expresses emotions I have felt as well.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

Thanks mikenbel I was thinking of it as careering, like down a mountainside. :) Your review is appreciated :0 Jaq xx

Comment from jppoet

Excellent

congratulations this is very well done, nice silky rhymes
and sweet metrical dances, engulfing a poem straight from the heart. i would have given it a six but ran out of stars this week. You will enjoy my latest poem "CURSE ON AN ADVERSE VIRUS". I find some affinity with your great poem, now lookin at your portfolio. john

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013

Thank you John.I will return the compliment after work tomorrow. Many thanks xx

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

a sad heartfelt poem reflecting the misfortunes of love and wanting to be loved.

loved the stanza...
Heart and soul, scythed
then sutured,
yet again, emotions
butchered.

very strong emotion of heat ache.

great job

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013

Thanks Tia much appreciated xx

Comment from Black_Oxygen

Excellent

Many readers can relate to this poetry; you are no alone.
A Lover of Love. The rhymes are not forced and I like the
way that the words are arranged on the page. It held my
interest from start to finish. Thank You for your
creation.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013

Thanks once again B_O ad always much appreciated xx

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Hello my friend love is a strong emotion and sometimes leads us to make difficult choices well done on this write and expressing your thoughts strongly regards Jill

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013

Thanks very much Jill xxx

Comment from lorijean

Excellent

Love is a very high emotion and does leave us open and very vunerable, very well written, with lots of feeling, good imagery

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013

Thank you so much once again lorijean xxx