Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Wonderful photograph. Sincere and loving Naani Poem about human expression. Well thought out and nicely written. Also, it met the syllable count requirement. Great job.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013

Thank you for a lovely review, Sunni. :)

Comment from words

Excellent

I do agree:

Destiny is what you achieve.

And we achieve it one action at a time.

And each action becomes a memory.

A thought provoking poem.

Hugs, d

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013

Thank you for the kind review, words, it was written for a graduation memory book.

Comment from Frank Atwood

Excellent

Cherished moments are from above that sometimes come on the wings of a dove. How we interpret them is a sign of ones free will as our health and happiness is tied to our own reasoning powers to live our own lives and be what we wish us to be as part of this world, not what we are meant to be and part of his realm, which is not of this world we are supposed to overcome. God bless Keep up the great writing and I had to say my two-cents worth.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013

Thanks for this detailed review,Frank.:)

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

Cherished memories,
Health, and happiness
Are the cornerstones in life.
Destiny is what you achieve.

beautiful written naani written in perfect 25 syllable count with a strong inspiring message.

Great job

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013

Thank you for a lovely review, Tia.

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

CHERISHED MEMORIES MADE THROUGH LIFE BY THE JOYS AND SORROWS WE HAVE ENDURED IN OUR LIFE TO CARRY ON THE LEGACY OF LIFE TO HAND DOWN FROM GENERATION TO GENERATION. YOUR DESTINY IS YOURS AND WHAT YOU MAKE OF IT

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013

Thank you for taking the time to review my poem.