Comment from Galactia

Excellent

This is an excellent poem, i wish i had a 6 for. smooth flowing perfect rhymes of aaaa.

favourite stanza's i found funny and so relating to me, especially now....

Today, a melancholy day,
Lost in a mood of dismal gray,
I sought to chase the clouds away,
Invited Muse, "Come out to play?"

For once, it seemed she would decline,
Devices left to me and mine,
With jumbled words, hard to define,
I struggle now to sense a sign.

great job

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2013

I had fun with this one, too. :)

Comment from 9999pool

Excellent

A muse with our inner thoughts and the flair for writing. Blessed are those who possess certain gift especially writing which can provide an avenue for us to voice our thoughts, to share with others and to enlighten and entertain.
To be able to write our muse, we have to find that time of day when all is calm and worries are far away. Under stress, duress or worries, the writing muse angel will have flown and hide.
Good pondering and a great muse about writer's block or swell, which ever the case may be.
Great write and well expressed.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013

Thank you for a wonderful review, Ritchie. :)

reply by 9999pool on 16-Apr-2013

Welcome, cheers, Ritchie. :-)))).

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Well, that is a daringly creative look at oneself. Well thought out. Original. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes too. Excellent work.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013

Thanks, Sunni. I think the biggest challenge I set for myself on this adventure was that the book be of conversations. It is proving harder than I thought to create, but a fun endeavor. :)

Comment from words

Excellent

I love it when this happends:

With clouds dispelled, a sunshine day,
As Muse and I go out to play,
Ideas flow like fountain spray,
From ink to page without delay.

So glad that she is back.

Hugs, d

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013

Thanks for a wonderful review, words. :)

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

Very interesting art work and words.

When one has a really good muse can help with ones writing.

I am sure our muse does help us in life.

Honey tree

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013

Thank you for a lovely review, honeytree. :)

Comment from Frank Atwood

Excellent

When poets open up their mind to new truths, then ones writing will improve as a poet improves their humanity to all things, and not just things learned of old. God bless and keep up the great writing.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013

Thank you, Frank. :)

Comment from TiffanyLeeBaldwin

Excellent

What a fun read. Your rhyming is great and vocabulary is very impressive. I enjoyed the fun in the emotion. Keep up the great work and a I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013

Thank you for a lovely review, Tiffany. :)