Comment from Galactia

Excellent

Another door opens,
New opportunities;
Destined for greatness
Your future awaits.


your doing great withn all these poem. keep them comming.

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2013

Thanks for taking the time to review each one, Tia. :)

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Stunning pairing of poem and artwork
Your poem of 22 syllables in 4 lines is in good naani form
I love the upbeat optimism of this poem as it points out all the possibilities one has in this lifetime :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013

Thank you for a delightful review, Brooke. I couldn't get past how perfect the artwork was for this piece. It is in direct contrast with the college hockey player just embarking on his dreams to play at the next level, the Andy, for whom I wrote this piece, but made me realize how universal this poem could truly be.

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

I loved the art work and words written.

During our life time I am sure many doors

Can be opened for us, we have to choose which one.

This can become an anxious time choosing which door to open.

Honey tree

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013

Thank you for a lovely review.

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Open those doors... I'm waltzing through all of them. Motivational as it offers hope. Also, you met all the requirements for a Naani Poem. Enjoyable poem. Great!

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013

I appreciate the kind comments and review, Sunni.

Comment from 9999pool

Excellent

Another new life, another new door to open all the other doors of life awaiting the babies.
New opportunities and destiny for greatness they will find.
The babies and children will grow up to know what life is all about.
As the future awaits, let them enjoy life just a little longer or for as long as possible.
Excellent Naani and well expressed.
Cheerio, Ritchie.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013

Thank you for this grand review, Ritchie.

reply by 9999pool on 14-Apr-2013

Hi Lovey Dovey,

Thanks for sharing. A grand review for a grand write. Smiles. Ritchie.

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Another door opens,
New opportunities;
Destined for greatness
Your future awaits.

A beautiful Naani that sings of greatness for the future. Such a wonderful write girl.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013

Thank you for a fantastic review, Gungalo.

reply by Gungalo on 14-Apr-2013

Smile