Conversations in Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Journey (A Sedoka for Jarret)"NaPoWriMo 2013 - 30 poems in 30 days
5 total reviews
Comment from Galactia
This is another inspirational poem.
favourite stanza is....
Journey through this life
As a student and scholar,
Relish all there is to learn.
I'm a big believer in that.
great job
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2013
This is another inspirational poem.
favourite stanza is....
Journey through this life
As a student and scholar,
Relish all there is to learn.
I'm a big believer in that.
great job
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 20-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2013
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Thanks!
Comment from honeytree
The art work is really great
The shining stars are special to see.
We are all part of the Universe
We have so much to see and ask
Why we are privileged to have such
Beauty around us all.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
The art work is really great
The shining stars are special to see.
We are all part of the Universe
We have so much to see and ask
Why we are privileged to have such
Beauty around us all.
Honey tree
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Thank you for this exceptional review, Honeytree. :)
Comment from sunnilicious
Jarret sounds likes a lucky guy for you to commemorate such a nice poem. And it is a lovely poem that is enjoyable to read and blessed with sound wisdom. Well thought out and nicely written. Great job.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
Jarret sounds likes a lucky guy for you to commemorate such a nice poem. And it is a lovely poem that is enjoyable to read and blessed with sound wisdom. Well thought out and nicely written. Great job.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Thanks for a stellar review, Sunni.
Comment from jaydub99
A tight little poem that has a great form and flow to it. I liked the message and how you weaved it in such a short amount of words. Your piece has great tone and along with the picture has a nice, compact punch. Thanks for posting.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
A tight little poem that has a great form and flow to it. I liked the message and how you weaved it in such a short amount of words. Your piece has great tone and along with the picture has a nice, compact punch. Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Thank you for an awesome review, jaydub99. :)
Comment from simplyteresa
I love the art you paired with the poem. You poem is so perfect this time of year as so many leave high school for higher learning. I really enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
I love the art you paired with the poem. You poem is so perfect this time of year as so many leave high school for higher learning. I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Thank you for a wonderful review. :)