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Conversations in Poetry

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NaPoWriMo 2013 - 30 poems in 30 days

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Comment from Galactia
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A prosperous man
Draws strength from
Adversity, to face off with life,
Meet challenge head on.

This is an excellent creative acrostic nanni poem. I often do that mix acrostic with different forms.

grear job

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2013
    I love to add the challenge of an acrostic to other forms, it is one of my favorite ways to write :)
Comment from BeasPeas
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Don't shirk/hide from challenges because they won't go away anyway. Last line 'meet challenge head on' is a good message for living.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
    Thank you for a great review, Beas. :)
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes this is well written my friend you used the art work creatively and created a strong nanni poem well done and good luck regards Jill

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
    Thank you, Jill. :) I appreciate your kind comments and review.
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
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Hello. Well said message here and good format. Drawing strength from adversity is indeed accurate. The word "meet" did you mean Meets or just meet. Good luck and cheers.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
    I meant meet... the entire line... "To face off with life, meet challenge head on." (Using the "face off" hockey term as an analogy of facing the challenges in life.) Thanks for a great review, Benjamin.