Conversations in Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Farewell"NaPoWriMo 2013 - 30 poems in 30 days
6 total reviews
Comment from Galactia
Lovely little acrostic you have composed reflecting a hockey game winners and hearing the roar of the crowed. great job and GL in the contest
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2013
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Lovely little acrostic you have composed reflecting a hockey game winners and hearing the roar of the crowed. great job and GL in the contest
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 20-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Tia. We love hockey here in Alaska :)
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Thanks, Tia. We love hockey here in Alaska :)
Comment from Alaskastory
'Farewell' is a fine tribute to the Nanooks, Kim. it's amazing that you put such a terrific photo of the players with it. Few may appreciate the total scene as we in Fairbanks do. Nice job! Marie
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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'Farewell' is a fine tribute to the Nanooks, Kim. it's amazing that you put such a terrific photo of the players with it. Few may appreciate the total scene as we in Fairbanks do. Nice job! Marie
Comment Written 12-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Thank you for this exceptional review, Marie. I am going to their end of season banquet tomorrow night. Am looking forward to that very much. This is an exceptional group of seniors and they will truly be missed.
Comment from honeytree
I loved the art work and the words very much.
To be able to watch this game and enjoy the skill
Seeing the persistence from the team.
The teamwork to help to win the game is great to watch.
It is great when a team wins.
The team that lost may win another day.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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I loved the art work and the words very much.
To be able to watch this game and enjoy the skill
Seeing the persistence from the team.
The teamwork to help to win the game is great to watch.
It is great when a team wins.
The team that lost may win another day.
Honey tree
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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Thank you for this wonderful review, Honeytree. :)
Comment from sunnilicious
Great poem to commemorate your favorite hockey team. Well thought out and nicely written. Good imagery. Creative and vivid. Nice photograph and author notes. Excellent work
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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Great poem to commemorate your favorite hockey team. Well thought out and nicely written. Good imagery. Creative and vivid. Nice photograph and author notes. Excellent work
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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I appreciate your kind comments and review, Sunni. :)
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Dovey, this is a great work that had me smiling - your poem showcases them as winners already:D
Great job I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Hi Dovey, this is a great work that had me smiling - your poem showcases them as winners already:D
Great job I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Thank you, Maureen. They are winners in my book. :)
Comment from beccabootie123
great write of how any fan for any sport would feel about their team. indeed the season starts with all hopes and we enjoy win or loose, there is always next year. formatted well the picture and color palate add to the sentiment. well done
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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great write of how any fan for any sport would feel about their team. indeed the season starts with all hopes and we enjoy win or loose, there is always next year. formatted well the picture and color palate add to the sentiment. well done
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Thank you for your positive review, becca. :)
