First Novel
This is a nonet about writing one's first novel.27 total reviews
Comment from guinea
Nice work here with your nonet. The words flow smoothly and with sincerity. Shows deep thinking. The picture goes well with your words.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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Nice work here with your nonet. The words flow smoothly and with sincerity. Shows deep thinking. The picture goes well with your words.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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Thank you, guinea, for your kind words and praise. RodG
Comment from Bayberry
I always like to encounter writings about writing. This one is written very well and holds interest because so many readers can relate to it on a personal level.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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I always like to encounter writings about writing. This one is written very well and holds interest because so many readers can relate to it on a personal level.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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Thank you, rhymster, for your kind words and excellent rating. I figured many writers on FanStory could relate to my Speaker's dilemma. RodG
Comment from Robert Loy Gonzalez
not sure what the item was he stashed away? just curious. anyways the structure of the poem is as precise as you made it to be. you did a wonderful job on it.
i noticed you were an english teacher. i recently started writting poetry and i was interested if you would be my fan so you could review it and tell me what you think. i am looking for a mentor in a way to help guide me the right way. let me know, either way great job hope to read more.
rob
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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not sure what the item was he stashed away? just curious. anyways the structure of the poem is as precise as you made it to be. you did a wonderful job on it.
i noticed you were an english teacher. i recently started writting poetry and i was interested if you would be my fan so you could review it and tell me what you think. i am looking for a mentor in a way to help guide me the right way. let me know, either way great job hope to read more.
rob
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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Thank you for your generous rating. First question: The speaker pulls out a manuscript of his first novel. Question#2. I would be delighted to workwithyou on your poems if you are willing to accept blunt criticism and are not just seeking stars. RodG
Comment from emjaihammond
You have done a very nice job of writing this in the nonet style. It's message is clear and distinct. I'm sure many on this site will relate to the subject. I know I do. Thanks for sharing it. I liked it.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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You have done a very nice job of writing this in the nonet style. It's message is clear and distinct. I'm sure many on this site will relate to the subject. I know I do. Thanks for sharing it. I liked it.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the fine rating and kind praise. I am pleased you can relate to the Speaker's plight. RodG
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Discarding, cancelling or throwing away first thought or second one is a common phenomenon in a writer's workshop, while novel should have something novel (strange) catchy idea, that's in search, I liked the dilemma captured. 6/104
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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Discarding, cancelling or throwing away first thought or second one is a common phenomenon in a writer's workshop, while novel should have something novel (strange) catchy idea, that's in search, I liked the dilemma captured. 6/104
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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Thank you for your generous rating and comments. RodG
Comment from Carole Rosa
Rod, Your poem "First Novel" is well written and pleasant to read. I understand it, unlike many of these nonet poems that other poets write. I write short stories and don't know anything about writing poetry, but I enjoy reading it. Nice job. Carole
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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Rod, Your poem "First Novel" is well written and pleasant to read. I understand it, unlike many of these nonet poems that other poets write. I write short stories and don't know anything about writing poetry, but I enjoy reading it. Nice job. Carole
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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Thank you, Carol, for both the excellent rating and your praise. I mostly write fiction, but I strive to write poetry the average reader can understand. I, too, detest obscure poetry. I am pleased you enjoyed this one. RodG
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
Good Nonet. I count 9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1 syllable count. The first line could read "She dragged it...." I cannot recall the number of times I have done this very thing. Good artwork choice. Enjoyed!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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Good Nonet. I count 9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1 syllable count. The first line could read "She dragged it...." I cannot recall the number of times I have done this very thing. Good artwork choice. Enjoyed!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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I am extremely pleased you both enjoyed and related to my poem. Thank you for your kind words and excellent rating. RodG
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You are welcome. MN :)
Comment from Titanx9
This is an awesome Nonet! I would suggest, you pull out that novel, do a quick read to re-familiarize yourself with the plot and characters, and get busy doing a rewrite and another rewrite, if needed. I like this poem!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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This is an awesome Nonet! I would suggest, you pull out that novel, do a quick read to re-familiarize yourself with the plot and characters, and get busy doing a rewrite and another rewrite, if needed. I like this poem!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Hi Titanx, I really appreciate your review and sage advice. It's been awhile since I read it , and your suggestion may be all the motivation I need to rewrite. Thank you. RodG
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Okay, now get to it and email me if you need a push in your get-along to get it going and keep it going. Good luck, and be blessed!
Comment from cephira
Great Nonet with a message a lot of us can relate to! LOL. Liked the details of 'spring cleaning' and 'dresser drawer.' You did a nice job on this one. Always impressed by these Nonet style poems. Hard to do, and you did it!
Cephira
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Great Nonet with a message a lot of us can relate to! LOL. Liked the details of 'spring cleaning' and 'dresser drawer.' You did a nice job on this one. Always impressed by these Nonet style poems. Hard to do, and you did it!
Cephira
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Thank you for your high praise, cephira. I am pleased you both like and can relate to my poem. RodG
Comment from mermaids
Excellent nonet form that brings up emotions about one's first novel. The writer often thinks "what should I do with it?' I like your subject and flow of words.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Excellent nonet form that brings up emotions about one's first novel. The writer often thinks "what should I do with it?' I like your subject and flow of words.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Thank you, mermaids. Indeed I do wonder what I'll do with it. I'm pleased you liked the poem. RodG