Conversations in Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "The Golden Thread"NaPoWriMo 2013 - 30 poems in 30 days
9 total reviews
Comment from Galactia
This is just a moving free verse, very well written and enjoyed. This is like an ode to a couple of people,rolled up in a pretty presented poem.
Well done and GL in the contest
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2013
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This is just a moving free verse, very well written and enjoyed. This is like an ode to a couple of people,rolled up in a pretty presented poem.
Well done and GL in the contest
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 06-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Tia.
Comment from Alaskastory
'The Golden Thread' is an inspiring read, Kim. The opening lines say what we all should recite often.
Of course, I find it even more special since it's in memory of the Porter Heart Center and touching effort by Kaare Odegard. Marie
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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'The Golden Thread' is an inspiring read, Kim. The opening lines say what we all should recite often.
Of course, I find it even more special since it's in memory of the Porter Heart Center and touching effort by Kaare Odegard. Marie
Comment Written 05-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Kaare is really an amazing person, Marie. He graduates next month and will be greatly missed. He is really an inspiration. Thank you for a wonderful review.
Comment from honeytree
Excellent art work and words written.
We are given a chance to know about love within our world.
Within our Spiritual knowledge we can become closer
To discuss issues that can be healed forever.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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Excellent art work and words written.
We are given a chance to know about love within our world.
Within our Spiritual knowledge we can become closer
To discuss issues that can be healed forever.
Honey tree
Comment Written 03-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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Thank you for your kind comments and review, honeytree.
Comment from Kingsland
It is said that only the good die young, but what good is a dead one. I liked the quote you gave from Einstein. He was one of the most brilliant persons to have ever lived. This was a well written poetic voice that I enjoyed reading and writing this response for... John
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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It is said that only the good die young, but what good is a dead one. I liked the quote you gave from Einstein. He was one of the most brilliant persons to have ever lived. This was a well written poetic voice that I enjoyed reading and writing this response for... John
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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Thank you for a wonderful review, John.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
thisi s very wel lwritten, dovey, you did an excellent job writing this free verse contest entry about difficulty bringing about innovations and new consideration for those around you. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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thisi s very wel lwritten, dovey, you did an excellent job writing this free verse contest entry about difficulty bringing about innovations and new consideration for those around you. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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Thanks for a wonderful review, sweetwoodjax.
Comment from GracieAnn
A nice treatise, of sorts, to encourage one who is immersed in self and then is brought back to a basic truth of giving to others in order to leave a lasting legacy.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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A nice treatise, of sorts, to encourage one who is immersed in self and then is brought back to a basic truth of giving to others in order to leave a lasting legacy.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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Thank you for taking the time to review, GracieAnn.
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
A wonderful free verse poetic work. I love the artwork! The descriptions of life's low moments and the wisdom of age are truths in most lives. I really liked the inclusion of Luke 6:38. Charity given is charity received, especially in the heart of man.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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A wonderful free verse poetic work. I love the artwork! The descriptions of life's low moments and the wisdom of age are truths in most lives. I really liked the inclusion of Luke 6:38. Charity given is charity received, especially in the heart of man.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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Thank you for this wonderful review, MidnightWriter.
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You are very welcome. MN :)
Comment from Frank Atwood
When one finds truth within, along with faith in the invisible, and forgiveness of all things, past and present, while staying away from hypocrites, one will have a very simple, but pleasant life in oneness with a God many preach about but never find or know. The thread is golden and silence harbors its truths. Very good. Keep up the great writing.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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When one finds truth within, along with faith in the invisible, and forgiveness of all things, past and present, while staying away from hypocrites, one will have a very simple, but pleasant life in oneness with a God many preach about but never find or know. The thread is golden and silence harbors its truths. Very good. Keep up the great writing.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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Thank you for this positive and supportive review, Frank.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
I'm not a poet but it's pretty obvious there are several aspects tot his poem. This reads and feels like a poem. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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I'm not a poet but it's pretty obvious there are several aspects tot his poem. This reads and feels like a poem. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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Thank you for taking the time to review, Evelyn.
