Poetry, Dreams In Motion.
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "First loves"A collection of poetry.
3 total reviews
Comment from Zenbud
Lovely form and tempo to this. So easily read and understood. I enjoyed the subject and could relate although I am way past feeling this way, I remember. Nice job, Zen
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Lovely form and tempo to this. So easily read and understood. I enjoyed the subject and could relate although I am way past feeling this way, I remember. Nice job, Zen
Comment Written 09-May-2005
Comment from Nescher Pyscher
To look on love as something so cooth(I'm pretty sure that's 'couth'.)...
Hmm.
I didn't like the use of 'lost' twice in that final stanza, but that's really all I got. (And I can't write one of these to save my life. :0) )
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To look on love as something so cooth(I'm pretty sure that's 'couth'.)...
Hmm.
I didn't like the use of 'lost' twice in that final stanza, but that's really all I got. (And I can't write one of these to save my life. :0) )
Comment Written 09-May-2005
Comment from NoobReader
This poem ryhmes nice
the poem is mixed with simple and complex words = well balance
the content of the poem is very touching indeed. Impressive
Nice work
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This poem ryhmes nice
the poem is mixed with simple and complex words = well balance
the content of the poem is very touching indeed. Impressive
Nice work
Comment Written 09-May-2005