Rosa's haunted past
Woman's hard struggle with life ,,2 total reviews
Comment from mizzkris20
Hi,
You have written a great short story but sadly to say it is not in 5/7/5 form. Youare very talented and I'll be willing to re rate it when you correct it.
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Hi,
You have written a great short story but sadly to say it is not in 5/7/5 form. Youare very talented and I'll be willing to re rate it when you correct it.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2013
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi hestersweet,
Welcome to FanStory!
This is not a 5-7-5 format. Which it needs to be for the contest. You can still revise it and I will re- review.
Go back to the guidelines for the contest and it will show you what a 5-7-5 looks like.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck.
Maureen
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Hi hestersweet,
Welcome to FanStory!
This is not a 5-7-5 format. Which it needs to be for the contest. You can still revise it and I will re- review.
Go back to the guidelines for the contest and it will show you what a 5-7-5 looks like.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck.
Maureen
Comment Written 01-Apr-2013