Semmingly Lost
Lost in a crowd2 total reviews
Comment from RodG
I am not sure what you're trying to tell us about individuals walking in a huge crowd. Does "You" refer to the individual or the listener? Is "calculate" the word you want, or is it "communicate"? Check the spelling of your title.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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I am not sure what you're trying to tell us about individuals walking in a huge crowd. Does "You" refer to the individual or the listener? Is "calculate" the word you want, or is it "communicate"? Check the spelling of your title.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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This is one among a crowd maybe small or tall, but nobody could ever add the distances or the time it would take you as the busyness of life, and to how busy...Thankyou...
Comment from rogerpolly
I enjoyed reading this. Very well done. You've crammed an interesting visual into so few words. Reminds me of downtown in New York.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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I enjoyed reading this. Very well done. You've crammed an interesting visual into so few words. Reminds me of downtown in New York.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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Thankyou very much...At a festival a i found a small boy, but alot of people were looking for him...But a lovely ending...I have never been to New York But Im sure It's packed with Amazing stories too.X
